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So what I’m planning to do for the game. and the New Order series in general.
in this one as this is my first game ever. I want to keep it on scope, but I want it to be good so I need more choices and political decisions that will set you on different paths and I need your guys help to do that. this one will deal more into the political side of the world.
Now for what happen to AMERICA
in a post apocalyptic America you need a confederacy, so this part will dive deeper into a chaste system, much more than what I will do with the Romans. Religion won’t be as strong in the American part as it will be with Germany or Britain. France will be the most religious of the nations in this part with Russia being the one in the most conflict. back to America, we will be focusing on the caste system and the nationalist politics of the nationalistic south and the idea of fascism propping up again in the apocalyptic America as the silver legion having roots and with no true federal government to outlaw slavery in the new world. but that’s all I’ll say about that.
And Now onto the British
Brittan won’t have much slavery there will be pockets yes, but this one will focus on religion and the idea of killing the second protestant revolution and separating the Anglican church from the English state. but with
Brittan separated will Scotland create it or will The Welsh, what role will Ireland play in all of this?
I have not been working on the game probably since I uploaded the bill system. but I had a bit of a burn out. but I thinking I can re-work the beginning and make it smoother and better. I’m also going to remove the socialist nation path, this doesn’t mean you can’t be a socialist or you can’t reform the nation into a socialist one. it just mean it won’t start out as one. this will be a full rework of the beginning and the Stats page, and should give some ideas of what paths you can go down.
I’m here to give an update at the rework, so far I’m planning to have a soft release that is optional before Christmas break, as around then my family will be moving to Texas. after that once the rework is fully complete `I will do a hard release that may ‘remove’ the rest of the game from the playable demo.
Hello, I know it has been a while and the game has been updated, this marks the Update Post on this thread, the next update shall be made on a new thread for the New Order good luck
"The important thing to know about an assassination or an attempted assassination is not who fired the shot, but who paid for the bullet.”
― Eric Ambler
Second, I wouldn’t ever quit this project. this is currently my passion. see when I first started this, I wasn’t using CSIDE, which helps me work on it. this caused my earlier sections in the game to be mediocre in my opinion. so after taking a semi-long hiatus, I learned that part of the game was unbalance which has given me the opportunity to rework those earlier sections of the game
I have some issues with this, which is a shame since the idea I am fond of.
The current writing style is very breazy and too impersonal.
Stuff just happens.
“The people are being naughty pick a guy” picks guy
“Rioters happening” Tells them to go away or stay
“Now we are talking about how you were elected”
*BROWN EYES MAN INTENSIFIES
“Now its something about your brother”
Stuff just happens one after another, and Im unsure if its meant to be important or not. I hope this is just for chappy one since if the whole game is done in this uber fast breezy style it will be quite hard to feel any connection to anything.
Secondly your grammar is quite… bleh.
Like before writing new content you should find yourself a free editing software, chuck everything you got in there, then re-release what you have. Since at the moment there are lots of V E R Y noticeable mistakes, such as lack of capital letters, words being smushed together, incorrect spelling such as when I saw “Familiay”
You just need to fix these things up then you should be good chief.
that, that’s just great. all of your criticisms are valid, I think most of my problems are coming off of my writing style and my lack of focus. so as i’m currently reworking all of this, it will hopefully all be fixed.