The New Lord (WIP)-Demo Updated 6 June 2018 and Poll in post#79

gender-choice

#44

So I made some minor grammar changes, and I made some more progress in meeting the other children!


#45

little girl = baby girl ?


#46

I wanted some alliteration, but I couldn’t decide between lass or girl. I ended up mushing the elements together. But, you’re right…I should just write the option as Baby Girl instead.


#47

also got this error : Chapter2 line 111: Non-existent variable ‘adivinian_magic’


#48

OH. Thanks for the input, it would be embarrassing if the main component of the game isn’t working.


#49

also if I may suggest a tiny thing , may wanna write up there that you can be female/male . Because the Title is very misleading , I almost passed your demo .


#50

Thank you so much for the optics advice! I chose lord because I thought that was more on the gender neutral side of things, but if that’s putting people off…


#51

honestly…I have to look up what’s the female word for ‘Lord’…if there are any lol

No worrie , you can keep it or change it later if the title isn’t set in stone . But pointing out you can play as such and have such orientation and all is very helpful . It’s pretty much what choiceofgames are all about . I wish you all the best in your story btw :slight_smile:


#52

Aww, that’s really sweet of you to say.


#53

so Doh moment lol must be more tired then I though…

Here what Google say : Tadam!

I mean…this : The appellation “lord” is primarily applied to men, while for women the appellation “lady” is used.


#54

Oh ok. Lord is usually for men and Lady is for women. I might brush up on regality I guess.


#55

lol that’s why I never write medieval stuff , I have a hard time remembering who is who .


#56

But it’s fun just wrecking all of the problematic elements of the Medieval Era and just…modernize it and/or wreck them.


#57

ha ha…well maybe , but you have to have a good grasp of that Era to write about it . And I aint good at history and stuff like that .


#58

Awwhhh, adorable first chapter!! I’ve never played as a Baby in a story before and the interactions between the relatives were very cute! I was intrigued by some of the powers that they had. Will we be able to play until the MC’s old age? I love stories like that! Or what age, exactly? Really looking forward to this! =)


#60

My plan is to keep the vignette style until the MC is in the age range of 21-24. Then THE BIG BAD CONFLICT will happen. From there…I guess It will seem timeless. Afterwords, I might have an epilogue of sorts


#61

WOOH! FINALLY GRADUATED HIGHSCHOOL. So, expect an update in the near future. From the amount of time it is taking me to code it, it might be an important one :wink:


#62

congratulation! and can’t wait ! :smiley:


#63

Woo I hope I will get to turn into animals as well just like saphirra


#64

Are you a Filipino because Mapagmahal is a Tagalog word???