The Mark of the Devil (WIP, 73K words) [updated May 3rd, 2026]

Sorry it took so long to respond! (it’s partly because I couldn’t figure out how to quote posts, until I realized it was the easiest thing in the world :skull:)

Truly a pleasure!!! My mind was buzzing after my first playthrough

Hell yeah, I can’t wait to read all of these!!

That’s very, very fair. If it’s any reassurance, I think even a very shy tweak might work out and permit people to see most of the reactive text, if they picked all the opportunities to raise a stat. But I trust in what you’ll end up doing!

If it’s any help, I wouldn’t worry too much about it. After all, people are genderqueer even before actually transitioning, and the way I saw it, the MC would just be closeted until that fateful chapter 4 moment. In fact, it would be weirder if someone didn’t consider it at all and switched genders on a whim. The way I saw it, it would just be some third and fourth options when you select your gender that would say something like “Of course you can’t do anything about it, but you’ve felt like X for a long time, although you live as Y”. I don’t know if it makes sense lmao, and I admit I might be assuming a lot :sob:. I don’t even think there would be too much flavor text needed to add, this early in the story!

But if you need anything more about it I’ll be glad to help out!

I’m so glad!!! The Carrie confirmation might be the push I needed to start out as a religious Mama’s girl, actually, hahaha! Let’s embrace it!!

It’s a pleasure! I definitely stand by it, too, and I love how where in Hereditary the horror is all about the emotional impact of a mother’s shocking grief, MOTD instead flips it: all the bone deep horror ends up being in the mother’s lack of care about what’s a deeply traumatizing moment for the older sibling. Agh. Chef’s kiss.

I’m super excited (and omg I’ll be a bloodhound trying to see if my theory holds up since apparently that route will reveal more things)! And hey, any progress is still progress. Take your time, don’t put too much pressure on your shoulders, and don’t be afraid to either take breaks or even to write other scenes in the meantime if it gets too much of a headache at some point.

The way I immediately added the playlist as soon as I saw you post. :victory_hand::squinting_face_with_tongue::victory_hand: Omg the AHS: Coven version of House of the Rising Sun!!! The vibes are PEAK. This book feels like it was written specifically for me at times. :sob:

Now I’m tempted to make a playlist for my bald daughter…

LMAO STOPPPPP I CACKLED :sob:

Deserved :speaking_head::clap:

Edit: Found the tumblr hell yes!!!

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How Abijah probably thought things would go with Sue

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This makes me feel terrible about how I wrote the scene :sob:

Lol thanks for the fanart, as always, it’s super cool, and I love your work!

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Looooong time reader of many IFs but I finally made a forum account to say how much I enjoyed this! The entire chapter two had me clutching my non-existent pearls. And waking up, hoping to be comforted, only to find I’ve basically been robbed?? Great cliff hanger! I’m eagerly awaiting more :head_shaking_vertically:

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Ah thank you! Glad you’re enjoying it! Keep an eye out, cause soon I’ll have news on when to expect the next update!

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Ahhhh I really love this!!! Great story and hlckvkfldldkksbsjs ALL THE FEEELS!! Really looking forward to future updates, can’t wait to see what happens! :face_holding_back_tears::face_holding_back_tears::heart_eyes::heart_eyes:

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Thank you! As some may have seen on tumblr, I come with news of the upcoming update!

Expect roughly a 10k word update by the end of the month! This will cover the intro section of the only child route, chapter 3 will not be updated until I finish this route.

Keep on the lookout, and thank y’all for your patience!

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Sorry if this question has been asked before!
There are ROs in the game, right? Ashael and Paul?