The Lawless Ones (Previously "Villains") Completed! (Beta Closed)



This is actually deliberate. You don’t get a relationship increase because you’re giving him the bare minimum that all the children are required to give him, no more, no less. (I might change this in the update, but I haven’t decided yet.) :thinking:


Giving what’s expected of you isn’t really that deserving of praise from a individual of that persons nature.

He has a mobster feel giving light is insulting
Giving extra deserves respect and appeal, giving the bare minimum is expected of you as you owe your livlyhood to them they are doing you the favor if you can’t even pay 5 sprockets you end up on his radar, paying 5 you stay out of his focus and can glide by.

That was my view on it. And I’d thought I’d say it to Speak on how it’s perceieved from another readers mindset. Good writing style for him btw.


Twiddles thumbs, patiently waits for Wildcard.



Agreed. I like Wildcard!


I’d say that convincing him to lower it to 3 sprockets should deserve a relationship increase. You’ve managed to talk a ruthless criminal into lowering his standard when he would probably kill someone else for failing to meet it, proving that you have talent. And the boss to me seems that he’s pragmatic enough to think losing a couple of sprockets to cultivate a talent is ok


I don’t think I like the idea of that. Basically, the way it is now, if you try to impress The Boss by giving him more money than he asked for, then you gain approval. If you manage to haggle it down, then you get to pay less and keep some sprockets for yourself. Adding a relationship boost to that option kind of makes the results of that option unfairly beneficial.

Basically, I don’t want the game to have “perfect choices” where one particular choice will have all the benefits of all the other choices combined. You either get the relationship boost, or you get to save yourself some pocket money. You can’t have both. :yum:

(Also, sorry for the massive delay. Been very busy over the Christmas period. Can’t wait until the prologue is done.) :confounded:


Awe man I gotten really engaged in this game that I’m disappointed it had too end because it’s a demo. Great story, interesting characters and MC backgrounds. I really want too continue the rest of it. Is there any news relating this game? Is there a chance that the game will be finished in full and we’ll get a chance too play a full game? It’s such a great game and don’t want this too be the end of it without us experiencing the fullness of the game


Avery Moore’s currently rewriting the game.