# The Last Laugh (Work in Progress)

**URL:** <https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-last-laugh-work-in-progress/74268>\
**Category:** Works In Progress\
**Tags:** gender-choice, super-powers\
**Created:** [February 21, 2020, 8:34pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-last-laugh-work-in-progress/74268 "2020-02-21T20:34:27Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 20\
**Page:** 6

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**Author:** ![Drakeye](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/drakeye/32/198625_2.png) [@Drakeye](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Drakeye)\
**Post date:** [April 19, 2020, 3:24am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-last-laugh-work-in-progress/74268/102 "2020-04-19T03:24:09Z")

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like a video game getting stuck. you type /stuck and the game usually deletes you and respawns you away from where you are so you are “unstuck”. I was implying you should hack reality.

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**Author:** ![Semi-Lovable](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/semi-lovable/32/95711_2.png) [@Semi-Lovable](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Semi-Lovable)\
**Post date:** [April 20, 2020, 6:53am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-last-laugh-work-in-progress/74268/103 "2020-04-20T06:53:32Z")

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Maybe you could put the Mother/Child moments in the beginning since I believe that’s when children are the most impressionable and more willing to satisfy their parent more so they can love them. Vera could try to instill her pathos or ideology and every time the child shows progress she gives he/she an award secretly in graining her knowledge. Schooling why her rival is horrible to her which thrives the child to want to protect her and help. Amongst other things too on how the world work in her POV.

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**Author:** ![Wesker22](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/wesker22/32/74927_2.png) [@Wesker22](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Wesker22)\
**Post date:** [April 20, 2020, 7:14am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-last-laugh-work-in-progress/74268/104 "2020-04-20T07:14:50Z")

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Thanks for the suggestions. I’ll see what I can do.

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**Author:** ![Semi-Lovable](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/semi-lovable/32/95711_2.png) [@Semi-Lovable](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Semi-Lovable)\
**Post date:** [April 20, 2020, 7:27am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-last-laugh-work-in-progress/74268/105 "2020-04-20T07:27:20Z")

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Not a problem. Glad to help out with a story I extremely like. Good luck with the progress.

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**Author:** ![Yuh-boy\_Anto](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/yuh-boy_anto/32/133132_2.png) [@Yuh-boy\_Anto](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Yuh-boy_Anto)\
**Post date:** [May 16, 2020, 4:08pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-last-laugh-work-in-progress/74268/106 "2020-05-16T16:08:14Z")

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I want this to be a thing so badly

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**Author:** ![Wesker22](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/wesker22/32/74927_2.png) [@Wesker22](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Wesker22)\
**Post date:** [June 11, 2020, 6:12am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-last-laugh-work-in-progress/74268/107 "2020-06-11T06:12:10Z")

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Hey everyone. Apologies for the slow progress. Been hitting a dead wall for a while. I made a tumblr blog specifically for this wip to keep in communication with everyone. Link is in the first post. 😁

Edit:maybe it’s because I’m on a phone but the link acts funny with me. Let me know if it gives you any trouble. Good day/night.

Edit 2: ok so what was bothering me is no longer there. Please let me know if the link works for you too. Apologies for any inconvenience the link may have caused.

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**Author:** ![Konoi](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/konoi/32/149904_2.png) [@Konoi](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Konoi)\
**Post date:** [July 19, 2020, 4:48am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-last-laugh-work-in-progress/74268/108 "2020-07-19T04:48:18Z")

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Wow, that’s an unexpected plot. I don’t think I’ve ever seen anything like that before.  
I’ve enjoyed it a lot, but it was waaay too short for me to give an actual feedback.  
And now I’ll go mad waiting for the next update 😅  
Seriously, that cliff hanger…

My character is so going to escape Vera’s control…

Anyway, good luck with the project! It’s great!

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**Author:** ![Thanh\_Chung\_Vu](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/thanh_chung_vu/32/89468_2.png) [@Thanh\_Chung\_Vu](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Thanh_Chung_Vu)\
**Post date:** [July 19, 2020, 12:07pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-last-laugh-work-in-progress/74268/109 "2020-07-19T12:07:28Z")

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This has interesting premise. Can’t wait to see how it would turn out.

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**Author:** ![Xyrin](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/xyrin/32/127224_2.png) [@Xyrin](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Xyrin)\
**Post date:** [September 23, 2020, 9:06am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-last-laugh-work-in-progress/74268/113 "2020-09-23T09:06:38Z")

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I’m looking forward for the next update. This seems so good! I’ll befriend the hero or make him my rival at the very least. I like Vera’s attitude though… Huh, what side am I gonna join here??🤔🤔

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**Author:** ![Jackpot1776](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/jackpot1776/32/128171_2.png) [@Jackpot1776](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Jackpot1776)\
**Post date:** [September 23, 2020, 6:09pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-last-laugh-work-in-progress/74268/114 "2020-09-23T18:09:42Z")

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NOOOOO!!! Right as I was getting into it, it ended! 😂 I love the concept, this game is going to be amazing!

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**Author:** ![Mistyleaf123](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/mistyleaf123/32/142193_2.png) [@Mistyleaf123](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Mistyleaf123)\
**Post date:** [October 26, 2020, 7:20pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-last-laugh-work-in-progress/74268/115 "2020-10-26T19:20:34Z")

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very fun game! can’t wait for more 🙂

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**Author:** ![ChaosBringerXV](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/chaosbringerxv/32/247809_2.png) [@ChaosBringerXV](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/ChaosBringerXV)\
**Post date:** [October 29, 2020, 11:23pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-last-laugh-work-in-progress/74268/116 "2020-10-29T23:23:48Z")

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The story that makes me wish for more lol 😆

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**Author:** ![aranea](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/aranea/32/125482_2.png) [@aranea](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/aranea)\
**Post date:** [October 30, 2020, 12:19am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-last-laugh-work-in-progress/74268/117 "2020-10-30T00:19:07Z")

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i love it! the concept is intriguing, and vera is such an interesting character. i also like how you set up her and mc’s relationship i’ll make you proud, mother 🥺, and i’m very curious as to how mega-man would react once he finds the mc hehehe…

in any case, this is such a fun read and i’m excited for this!

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**Author:** ![TheOfficer](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/theofficer/32/159663_2.png) [@TheOfficer](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/TheOfficer)\
**Post date:** [October 30, 2020, 12:39am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-last-laugh-work-in-progress/74268/118 "2020-10-30T00:39:47Z")

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Is Vera or Mega-Man a RO?

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**Author:** ![aranea](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/aranea/32/125482_2.png) [@aranea](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/aranea)\
**Post date:** [October 30, 2020, 1:00am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-last-laugh-work-in-progress/74268/119 "2020-10-30T01:00:24Z")

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not sure about vera, but mega man isthe hero your mc is cloned from so probably not?

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**Author:** ![Harley\_Robin\_Evans](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/harley_robin_evans/32/86044_2.png) [@Harley\_Robin\_Evans](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Harley_Robin_Evans)\
**Post date:** [October 30, 2020, 1:00am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-last-laugh-work-in-progress/74268/120 "2020-10-30T01:00:57Z")

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Can’t romance mega man be incest haha and Vera doubt it she probably just want to do her own goals

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**Author:** ![MichaelCrank](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/michaelcrank/32/95879_2.png) [@MichaelCrank](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/MichaelCrank)\
**Post date:** [October 30, 2020, 1:06am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-last-laugh-work-in-progress/74268/121 "2020-10-30T01:06:20Z")

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Wes has mentioned that there’s no ROs in this thread. Sorry everyone.

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**Author:** ![HeliosTheAll-Seeing](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/heliostheall-seeing/32/93132_2.png) [@HeliosTheAll-Seeing](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/HeliosTheAll-Seeing)\
**Post date:** [October 30, 2020, 9:04pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-last-laugh-work-in-progress/74268/122 "2020-10-30T21:04:15Z")

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Reading the first part I was all “hell yeah I’m this universe super man 😃 and then I read the next part and I kinda deflated 😂” lol but honestly it sounds amazing, about to check it out.

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**Author:** ![Gwen\_SleepyHead](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/gwen_sleepyhead/32/133357_2.png) [@Gwen\_SleepyHead](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Gwen_SleepyHead)\
**Post date:** [December 23, 2020, 12:04pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-last-laugh-work-in-progress/74268/123 "2020-12-23T12:04:52Z")

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It’s interesting so far! Looking forward to the rest of the story 🙂

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**Author:** ![The\_Phantom](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/the_phantom/32/118001_2.png) [@The\_Phantom](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/The_Phantom)\
**Post date:** [December 23, 2020, 12:18pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-last-laugh-work-in-progress/74268/124 "2020-12-23T12:18:28Z")

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Is Mega Man related in any way, shape, or form to the super fighting robot from Capcom?

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