i’m glad it’s working haha i feared i might mess it up with those ones
also, nice you liked them plus the hide and seek scene, i had tons of fun writing both
i have read your suggestions and i thank you for all of them
that’s actually a great point, i’ll add to an option to make the tw optional
that’s so relatable it hurts hahaha i’ll add some next update then! i also suggest this site to pick some names if anyone more is having trouble with it! (i picked some from there too )
i’ll remember to add those later in the game, as well as height!
yeah, after all, allon children are known for their magic. that’s a great point you have and one i’m definitely considering
oooh i haven’t thought about that! that really makes sense!!
I almost forgot, i picked a small pronoun error, i select R as a female but in this one sentence in the first hang out refers her as a he, nothing mayor.
listen great game but what’s up with the brazilians in the uquiz. as a brazilian i cannot handle nor am i used to this shithole of a country getting recognized beyond being a worldwide shame
ata porra KKKKKKKK eu aqui feliz dos ator br serem reconhecidos pelas internet estrangeiro. pelo menos bom trabalho em colocar a cara da alessandra e lazaros pros gringo.
I’ll switch back to english in this thread whenever i comment something in here for the sake of this being a site written in english. But it’s good to see a fellow brazilian in here. I adored the demo and the premise of the world; but maybe I’m biased, because i saw the words “dragon age” and already decided i would like it. R reminds a lot of Zevran, so I already like them already, but I am a sucker for enemies-to-lovers…
Great story! I like all the extra skill stats you have, instead of just sticking with the basic 3 or 4. It adds a lot of variation. You may wanna get an editor to help with the grammar though. It’s perfectly understandable, just some mistakes here and there. Keep up the good work, and good luck!
Loved the story, great story line. Characters are each unique with different back stories and personalities which I really enjoyed. Especially loved the point system for our skills. It’s not a whole lot to go on just yet, but you have wet my appetite so definitely looking forward to future updates. Please keep up the good work
This week, on “Wow, Lindorwin is so beautiful when you’re being accused of murder:”
Fixed some Bugs and Typos.
Substituted skin descriptions to make it simpler and switched “afro” to “coiled hair.”
Made some small changes in Allon and Atrix’s Children.
Content Warnings are now optional to avoid spoilers.
Added name suggestions and hidden achievements!
Finished the Chapter 3 surprise attack and started the travel around Broken Grove.
Goals For Next Week
Actually, this week, my goals changed a lot since the last update with all the people who joined me in the meantime, so I’m mostly passing them by to the next.
Finish Chapter 3, which includes a searching scene, a moment of choice with the Order (you’ll get what yours soon enough, X stans ) and the arrival at Belanore.
Thanks for reading. May your path never be abandoned by the eye of the Observer. <3
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Weekly Update — 04/06/2021
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