@DragonWarrior I haven’t had any issues with my browser lately, so while that’s still a possibility, I thought trying to ask would be worth it. It seems interesting, and I was hoping to try it out. Maybe the link doesn’t work anymore, maybe a newest update had some faulty code that made that happen, I don’t know. I just hope that, if it’s just an error, they’ll find what it is.

Last post from the author was over a month ago. I’m inclined to believe this WIP is not active and quite possibly abandoned.

There’s still the possibility that the authors has simply been too busy to tend to the WIP/thread. I’ll hang onto my hopes until the author themselves decides to say something about it, I guess.

Sandstorm might be idle again. She was gone from November to January last year, but nonetheless came back. So as dashingdon said, she’s prolly just busy or something. I don’t think it’s abandoned though.

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Sorry for being gone for so long! I was up in the mountains (Literally :anguished:) for the past two months with nothing but my phone and clothes (No charger :cold_sweat: ). Fortunately, I was able to see the mistakes and what should be deleted from the current version of the game. I realize I’ve become too ambitious and as it stands now, my skills aren’t up to par with my goals for the game. I’ve written a new layout for the game, and I think it’s the best one yet, and I really believe I could finish it :smile: .

Since I just got back, I haven’t written a lot, so it’ll be a while before I can put up a new demo. But if you’re interested, here’s a few things I changed:

-Iris will be introduced early.
-Changed my character concept for General Marth.
-Peach Bell is unfortunately gone. I can’t really place her anywhere in the new version.
-Changed Void’s appearance.

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I’m happy and a bit sad about this since im happy you’re back to working on it but a little bit sad that peach bell isn’t in it

I know that feeling. My mom brought us to the countryside at the start of summer (causing me to miss our class’ farewell party), she said it would be ‘four or five days’.

Four or five days my ass, I had no internet for two whole weeks! No manga, no LN’s, nothing.

It doesn’t help that I left my netbook’s charger, so I couldn’t even write or read the Warhammer 40k rulebooks I downloaded just for fun.

On another note, we had roasted pig. which calmed me down.

I really enjoy the demo so far. Just a suggestion though, I think for the following scenes:

I believe it would be better if we are:
(1) Given a summary on what each options imply
E.g. Provide more descriptions on each division and the respective months, the strengths and
weaknesses of the various weapons.
(2) Given a chance to confirm our decisions
E.g. The month of Phoenix…related to fire…(brief description)
Are you sure you are born in the month of Phoneix? (A chance to retract earlier decision)

Another option would be to ship the descriptions to the stats page.

Btw, why is it that even though my subclass is Cleric, Iris still have to heal me after the boss fight (with the statue and shadow)? Can’t I just heal myself?

Another thing to add, I don’t know why but somehow when I play this demo as a female character, it makes me sound like a homosexual… can’t the MC’s interactions with the various characters depend on his/her sexual orientation? Talking about that, I think it would be a good idea to include a “What’s your sexual orientation” page, maybe it helps in solving this issue.

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New updates are up! I’m always nervous whenever I put up a new update, but I’m even more nervous now. I’ve deluded myself by believing this is the best version yet, but you might think otherwise though. So please, don’t hold back on the critiques and things that I should change.

If anyone wants to ask what are the items are for or each character’s growth, please feel free to ask!

Notes on the items:
-The stat up items like the pure water can’t be used for the Little Girl unless she’s class changed.

The save system is not working right now. Not really sure why…

So next update will probably contain the part where the Little Girl reveals her powers, although I’ll be adding a bit more scenes here, especially some Castor-centric scenes since I feel like he’s lacking in appearances.

@Keira Thanks for the suggestion. I am having a hard time writing it from a girl’s point of view. I’ll definitely add the “What’s your sexual orientation” choice. And confirmation choices as well.

@Hell_Satan I’m not really sure what to do with that one, since I play the game on my phone as well and it’s okay.

Demo: https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/154805048/web2/girl%20of%20time%20v3/index.html

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When I tried to look at emerald rosary an error popped up saying variable non-exsistent

I like the story so far. But didn’t get very far until I found this:

Otherwise, it seems really interesting. c:

Question about sexual orientation, is Raven still for girls only? The witch is hinting that Raven likes guys. Granted, I probably shouldn’t have this weird need to get into everyone’s pants…

Um OP may I offer my services to you to comb the demo for grammar mistakes and typos? I noticed a few on a brief read and I can compile a list for you if you’d like.

Update: Fixed all the bugs and errors reported :smile:

@Beezlebub Yes I graciously accept your offer!

Chapter nine line 1049 couldn’t parse the line after *selectable_if (close = no)

Also if you try to choose cleric it sends you to the mage confirmation scene. Also you get a error when you choose mage. (But I love being the medic class :frowning: )

You didnt finish the mages coding with a *goto or finish or something like that.

The class error is fixed! thanks for pointing that out :smile: I can’t seem to find what’s wrong with the first one though, although it keeps on popping out even now…

Noticed two more glitches.
One when you choose to be a volunteer.
And another when we kiss castor.
(Non existant variable lovers)

Thanks for pointing them out! They’re fixed now :smile:

One more bug (this one seems massive) when I was defending as an armor knight everytime raven hit me ny health went up so either its a glitch or raven has the worst sword ever.

Is something wrong with the link?When I click on it I just get a text box with “enter name” written above it.