The Fifth Horseman: Fear [WIP] Update 23/11/20

Me too. It’s kind of refreshing to see Death being portrayed in a different light, honestly.

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Also kinda glad Death is female lol.

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I was watching Now you see me and I was like hmmm four horsemen :thinking: in-ter-es-ting and then was like omg imagine a fifth one, saw my brother’s face when he stole my sister’s cookie and got caught. Ooh he afraid and then bam! TFH: Fear LMAO

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Dude Death is best girl with Conquest coming in as a close second. That :clap: bar :clap: scene :clap: though :clap:

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Wow some of ye are really looking into this when I just came up with this because I’d rather do anything but things related to my school.
Yah there will be a lot of grammar and just normal mistakes because my grammer is the worst thing in the world. English is the only subject where I barely passed and it’s my second-ish language AHHA so sorry guys

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You can always hire an editor later If need be

Y’all are so nice I mean even on Tumblr… Why? But thank you so much!! I’m glad you like it :heart:

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:neutral_face::+1::neutral_face:

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I’m just doing this for the crack of it hahdha, but maybe I will who knows :thinking: I probably won’t… I’m broke

Yo the quote was “if need be.” Not “you have no choice.” You do you, I’m just gonna sit here in the back and wait for more. Again :neutral_face::+1:

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Thanks for the info :slight_smile: That makes sense

I read the demo and I think it’s pretty good! I didn’t necessarily know that much about the horsemen of the apocalypse so I’m happy to discover something relatively new to me. I can’t wait to explore the relationship between Fear and his/her/their “old” friends once they’re all back together again.

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:eye::lips::eye:

:potato::potato: I can be a potat​:potato::potato:
Me happy. Thonks!

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I really like the demo.

It was a fun read.

I really wanted to see the others two horsemen, well their meeting with the MC.

A little problem :
After choosing tipsy, I couldn’t choose to not say anything to Willow. I got this : chapter01 line 644: bad label pantsonfire
Edit : it works when you’re drunk. Why ? Let’s all be tipsy ! Ah, ah.

Nice idea and story ~.

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very fun game! when i saw choose your gender: potato, i laughed so much my sister asked me if I was mental lmao :joy: :joy: :joy:

i like the male RO’s alot :slight_smile:

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The premise is exciting! I’m so excited to play Fear. I find fear as a concept absolutely fascinating. As a theme, it’s one of my favourites.

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Thanks! It should be working now.

Wow I’m so glad ye guys like that lil potato thing ahahsha

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I confirm : it works perfectly ! Thanks ~

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This line reminded me of my favorite anime Azure Lane. Enterprise used to say: “War never changes regardless of times” or something like that.

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Great and super entertaining demo! Definitely bookmarking it :grin: There’s a slight error. When choosing tipsy and taking up Willow’s offer of a ride home, there’s another line that says that I took taxi home. Here:

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