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I meant to reference the Fallout post-apocalyptic game series, as here the mc is a horseman of the apocalypse.
Anyway I really hope we get to use that line in game when talking to or about War sometime. :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

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This is really awesome I love it :grin:

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Pestilence and famine are often interchanged, I believe.

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I’m just here, loving Conquest’s subtle affection to our MC. :rofl:

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No one is talking about War and Famine and like okay yes the other two are female and great and I totally think they rock BUT war freaking slapped mc before they DIED I think there should be some retaliation! I can’t wait to hopefully meet them later on

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Oh wow!!! I like this story and where it’s going :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:. Can’t wait to see the finished product of your hard labor.:sunglasses::face_with_monocle:

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Honestly they are all to kind for my liking…

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LOL sorry :sweat_smile: i just straight up have a hard time writing nasty people, idk how people do it, I am no writer bro. :upside_down_face:

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They’re fine as they are

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I think it is a refreshing change. I mean, death, war, famine, pestilence, all so dark and gloomy, but no! These guys are chill! I love it, such a pleasant surprise

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Huge disappointment when I couldn’t play as a potato carrying a double axe. I could scream at my enemies “YOU SHALL TURN INTO FRENCH FRIES, BASTARDS!” lol

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Love this prologue… was sad to finish it.
Can’t wait chapter 1.

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I like how you have them written to be honest, because if they live with and defend people that closely and are that close of a team i wouldn’t imagine them being rude or nasty.

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absolutely love how the story is going so far! the concept is very very interesting so im excite <3

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Tiny update
So i decided to doss school because they are literally doing nothing to teach us and because of that I managed to finish the part of ch1 where you meet War! it is short tho ngl. :] I’m praying everything works now.

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Btw how do you edit the original post? I don’t see that pencil icon anywhere.

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Found a bug when your choosing who will win the contest it gives an error when I try to choose death or war

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Thanks! It should be working now

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You don’t have that option yet. You need to reach member status first. You probably meet all the requirements and just need to wait till your account is old enough.

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I think you can contact the @moderators for that? I guess.

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@SuperTired I made your original post a wiki so you’re able to edit it now!

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