I found this very interesting! I’m glad you took the advice to keep the MC’s characteristics vague because…I did kind of put my features into the MC lol so I was surprised to find out the MC was blonde. However, it makes since the “non human” parts the MC has are from their father aside from the wings and I always play as female.
I thought it was nice that you also showed the champions point of view. It’s a nice change of pace since the focus is usually on “you” the mc/reader.
I was pleasantly surprised to that who you meet differs depending if you win or lose the royal battle.
And the way you ended the demo as of today, is quite a cliffhanger. I can’t help but think it’s a trap. Lol