The Fallen Divine (WIP-Alpha Update 10/07/21)

The author’s reply to a similar question.

Which champion do you think is the best commander? Riva or Odom? I don’t think sylvan can be considered considering his background unfortunately

I like Riva more than Odom.

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Depends on what type of champion you like, if you prefer heavy hitter or tank odom is your choice, riva is a finesse fighter and tactician while sylvan is a berserker and somewhat of a wildcard


I think they all bring something to the table, sylvan’s unexperienced as a battle strategy but he has baptiste and his lack of teachings actually helps him for unorthadoxed approaches because his perception of battle isn’t focused or limited on taught tactics.


It’s been a while since I posted the poll for the Champions. This time, I wanna know which of the Mages you guys like most :sparkles:

  • Kincaid, because of his personality
  • Kincaid, because of his skillset
  • Penny, because of her personality
  • Penny, because of her skillset
  • Karh’kaz, because of his personality
  • Karh’kaz, because of his skillset

0 voters


Is there any RO’s in here or is it just allies?

The author can correct me, but from what I know Josaphat and Linaria are the two ROs.


Yup, they’re ROs.

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And here I was expecting to romance the Champion whomever they are.

I think considering that there’s 3 different Champions, 3 different Mages and 3 different assassins, it wouldn’t have been realistic to make them all romanceable considering players won’t even meet 2/3 of these characters. And we’ll have 5 other companions, so that would mean writing 24 romances only for people not to even meet 16 of the characters in a playthrough.

The author did say more ROs would be introduced in the next book.


I wonder if that would work well since by the next book the plot will have progressed up a notch so the ROs might feel under-developed compared to established ROs of the first book.


I found two errors, in the first one it says “taking odom to your side” it should say Riva because i choosed her, in the second error it says $!as_name}’s instead of the name of the assasin (idk if this happen with all of them but it happens if you choose the one with the rings).

I have decided." Riva looks up at you. “I will be your Champion.”

You manage hold back a sigh of relief. Your Aunt Sariel offered to take care of the rest of the Ro Owan Army, and left the responsibility of taking Odom to your side on you— something you prefer she did herself.

You hold your breath when $!as_name}’s mouth opens, her brows furrowed. She starts to breathe once more, and she starts to scream soon after. She’s still alive and her heartbeat has improved, but there is still a gaping hole in his stomach. “We need to get them to the Sanctuary,” you say, more to yourself than the others. As Edmund and the other monk make certain that your order is fulfilled, you turn back and call for your aunt. “Sariel!”

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How long and large is the the large tail?? Is it like freza’s tail?? Are they all long like freza’s tail?? I’m a little confused on the tails


Honestly, I can’t really say if it would work.

But regarding the progression of the romance in the first book versus the later introduction of new ROs in the next one, I really don’t think any single one will be left behind. Mainly because this was a story that originally did not have romance. They were added later on. I’m basically squeezing romance routes in an already condensed storyline. While I don’t regret making the change, it is still a difficult change to make work.

So the easiest solution for me was to just let the romance take a back seat. Some may see this as lazy, but I really don’t want to deviate too much from what I want this series to be.

There will be progression for the relationship of the MC and Josaphat or Linaria, but not that much that the future ROs, when compared, will feel underdeveloped. At least, that’s what my vision is.

So that I won’t worry too much about all this, the reassurance I always tell myself is that: ‘in real life, we don’t meet all the people we have the possibility of being attracted to, physically or emotionally, in such a short timespan’.

Yes, I’m hyping myself up with reality even though this is a fantasy story :metal:

But rest easy that I’m doing my bestest to give the ROs justice.

However long or large you want it to be. I provided details for the customization, but it’s up to the readers to bring it to life using the power of…

[insert spongebob imagination meme here]


Are our champions and mages ROs?

Nope, just Josaphat and Linaria in this book
No romancing the champions.


May 20 Update

Chapter 5 is up!

This is the last chapter of the public demo. But future updates for previous chapters will still be applied for the demo, like the rewrite for part of chapter 2, and more content for chapter 3.

Enjoy the update!


Will old saves work or do we have to start fresh? And thx for an update

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I believe if you’ve played the rewrites for the prologue and chapter 1, then the saves from that point on should work. I’m not sure for older saves though.