This chapter was a delight. I can totally see my MC, who up to this point had to run away from Cazius and dealt with Durj’s anger and violence with diplomacy, become friends with Blihja through pranks and going up against those she’d normally not confront without a specter at her side (and in turn Blihja calming down perhaps a little bit, too). I like the continuation of Weden vs Blihja, and I really liked the end where the MC considers their friends to be like family, especially after how the MC thinks back on their mother in the previous chapter.
His dagger glances right off you like a baguette, and his surprise is oh so satisfying.
made me laugh with the imagery, and I think best encapsulates the fun of the scene and mood of the chapter.
My only disappointment was here –
You suddenly feel a lump appear in your throat. “I’m so sorry,” you say in horror. “I was so caught up in everything, I forgot how much she made you suffer, too. I forgot how terrible all of this might make you feel.” (Requires 65 Weden)
I wasn’t able to choose this line despite making sure I had picked all the options that increased his relationship previously.
No, he’s someone else, thogh you’ll be shocked to know that he’s yet another man who is supposed to be protecting the village.
“thogh” should be “though”.
This doesn’t exactly sound like your idea of fun, but if Blihja is intent on harrassing someone, you’d rathet it was Del than you.
“rathet” should be “rather”.
He unsheathes a dagger from his belt and brandishes it, saying, "Aww, do we have a do gooder here?
“do gooder” should be “do-gooder”.
These times are kotoriously brief, and you plan on taking full advantage of this opportunity.
“kotoriously” should be “notoriously”.
Looking forward to spending some time with the group.