The Enchanter's Misery [3/30 Chapters, 54k words]

high-fantasy
nonbinary-inclusive
gender-choice
young-adult-fiction

#142

Theres a bug in chapter 3 where after I help envy with the grave robbers and press next it glitches


#143

Every time I do a particular set of choices, this happens:

and the screen freezes. Otherwise awesome story!


#144

Thanks. That’s fixed now.


#145

I haven’t tested it further, but in my second playthrough I’ve chosen Illusion Magic, but during the scene where I decided to fight that bandit, I was able to select the option with corporeal magic despite being an illusionist.


#146

Thanks, that’s fixed now.


#147

I obviously love MMM the most, but this? This is honestly your most impressive WiP. Look what you did. God dammit, Samuel. Expect a review of current content soon.

Heavy sigh.


#148

Yay :smiley: thanks, @ArchangelVoldemort


#149

Skarro is suddenly labeled enchanter


#150

@Noah


Illuminati confirmed!!
#X-Files


#151

For some reason, every single time I go through this I am reminded of one of my favorite lines from a movie. “They mostly come at night. Mostly.”

I love the work put in so far, and am eagerly waiting for more just like everyone else in this thread.

Why, oh why, do you have to write so well that I want to read everything a million times over just to experience it all over again even though with my stupidly long memory it makes it impossible to forget something I’ve read?


#152

“The enchanter” was referring to Durj there, but it is confusing, so I’ll change that. Thanks.

@Lycanthromorphic
Thanks so much! That actually sounds really cool. :stuck_out_tongue:


#153

I have illusion magic, not corperal


#154

Whoops. I already fixed that but kept forgetting to update it on dashingdon. It should be good now.


#155

save feature doesn’t work

typos


made “me” piss

I think it should be “torch”?

go with “you”


#156

Damn, I’m not sure how to fix it. There was just a feature on Dashingdon called “enable CJW’s save feature” that I clicked.

Thanks, I’ll fix those tonight.


#157

i keep getting notifications for this even though they are from hours ago.


#158

10/10 so far, Lot of freedom and choices and cause I get the option to romance a demon.


#159

I think this is one of the best intros to a game I’ve seen on CoG so far. The story really drags you in and makes you feel like you know and care about the characters already. The premise is fascinating, and I’m really interested to get to know the ghosts better, as well as the other character’s of course. I love Envy’s carefree, fun loving character, and I just have so much sympathy for Oztiax. I just desperately want to start a fight with anyone who gives him trouble.

So far I’ve only found one mistake, and that’s in the scene where Weden is doing an impression of Blihja. It says, “doing his chest impressesion of the specter”. I’m guessing that’s supposed to be “best” and “impression”.


#160

Chest impressesion :sob::sob::sob: those are the ugliest typos I’ve ever seen, haha.

Thanks so much :smiley: that means a lot.


#161

Not necessarily… He might’ve been doing this:

See! Chest impression. :grin: