Big like for the demo! The team interactions alone make for an interesting read; factor in magic and intriguing cast and you have a recipe for an awesome story.
Regarding the plot - why hasn’t MC mentioned problems with Blihja? Granted her appearance is recent, but wouldn’t your team members be able to help you with her? Considering how powerful she seems, wouldn’t it make sense to tell at least someone about her, since she could be potentially dangerous to others as well?
If a demon (or any other dark creature) steals a dead body with a soul trapped inside, it can take it to the Netherworld. What happens then? What about soulless bodies - are they useless to the demons?
Oztiax rolls his eyes, but Skarro snorts in amusement, covering his mouth and snickering to himself.
I’m not sure, if it is possible to be doing all three at the same time.
Your heart beat begins to quicken and you can feel a shiver descend your spine as you turn back around, marching down the path with purpose, now.
And considering in the next paragraph begins with “You start to quicken your pace …” I’d consider switching one “quicken” for “speed up”.
As you grunt, scrambling to your feet, your see a black-clad man darting towards you, bolas gripped in his hand.
Alternatively, you could also write:
With a grunt, you scramble to your feet, only to see a man clad in black darting towards you, bolas in his hands.
I’ve also gotten the same bug as the person before me (bandit line 112: Non-existant variable ‘fight’)