i fixed some typos and similar mistakes, also the age has been corrected and continued a bit

in that case it is fell, because the mc has already woken up at that moment

Edit: enjoy the cliffhanger

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Anything containing Gunblades becomes my favorite!!! Its great so far! Keep up!!!

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I had time for a new update, go me!

The contents are a surprise

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Out of frustration you immediately shoot a bullet at him, which she manges to deflect.

“Now that was unexpected, you almost got me.”, she sounds surprised.

You pout because she managed to deflect your surprise attack.

“I guess this was still a it too hard for you, but no worries, you will manage, eventually.”, she sheathes her sword,looks at you, tilts her head and sticks her tongue out.

1.Tackle her

2.Ignore him

Nora was called him twice

And another one

You explain her that Mythspire is surrounded by a huge chasm and that there is no escape, she eyes you carefully as if not sure whether to believe you or not.

Choices

1.And she has his reasons, you’re not above lying

2.She is just teasing you, you never lie, to her

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Another one

Whether you lied to him before or not, she decides to believe you

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Should be fixed, my apologies for that

Read part of the summary and thought immediately of Captain Planet. He’s obviously who sits on the last throne.

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long time no update
anyway i am nearly done with chapter 1 and i will stop trying to update daily, it became next to impossible for me and i will from now on change the date in the headline for any update instead of completed chapters

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Morning, well what has changed:
Chapter 1 is done and 2 is in progress you can currently pick your starting chapter and I added some lines at the beginning of the chapters.
enjoy

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enjoy the cliff hanger

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Well I changed something in the first post, basically I added a RO label to each romanceble character, if anyone has some questions just ask, if it could be a spoiler i will give warning beforehand

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Nora will be my first choice for sure. Need to get to know the others to know who will get the 2nd spot :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

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Well I have been wondering for a while now, @BrachydiosX and I have been discussing Christas past a bit and I would like to know if there is some general interest in her past, I am currently not sure when to add it in the wip itself, so it would become a side story for the time being. In addition all the ROs shall be added aswell.

  • yes there is interest
  • No there is not
  • I do not care

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A little change premonition:
Reans gender will match noras, with the next update. RO reasons

Picked Nora’s gender as female.

Throgh the normal course or the chapter short cut
Wait found it

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Got this now.

should be fixed now, I forgot to upload two files

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Well Chapter 2 has been finished
This update is rather small, because university is eating much time

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What you can expect from the next update (coming soon):

  • Ellen/Rean introduction
  • If you have a Gunblade, part of it can be upgraded (more stable as blade or more accurate as a gun)
  • first date
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Will it be with Nora/Noah?