# The Cruel Guardians **URL:** \ **Category:** Hosted Games\ **Tags:** nonbinary-inclusive, gender-choice, high-fantasy, young-adult-fiction\ **Created:** [October 29, 2022, 4:24am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-cruel-guardians/127131 "2022-10-29T04:24:09Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 20\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![Samuel\_H\_Young](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/samuel_h_young/32/275765_2.png) [@Samuel\_H\_Young](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Samuel_H_Young)\ **Post date:** [October 29, 2022, 4:24am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-cruel-guardians/127131/1 "2022-10-29T04:24:09Z")
This is a thread for my Hosted Game, [The Cruel Guardians](https://www.choiceofgames.com/user-contributed/cruel-guardians/) ![SAMFINISHED](https://global.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/original/4X/4/6/9/469e6d4e0ef1ecaca5168d38535aedbd311b7c53.jpeg) **Summary:** Being the noble of a manor has its perks: you can enjoy feasts, fine entertainment, and even correspondence chess games with the king himself. Of course, there are many responsibilities that come with ruling over a castle and countryside too. You must keep ambitious bandits in check; hold court and consider your subjects’ many requests and problems; and navigate a complex political world where making one group happy often means making another discontent. Yet no one ever prepared you for being haunted by a mysterious demon, or contending with a group of new radicals called anarchists. The demon seems intent on terrorizing you into adopting her own moral code, and the anarchists will never be content until they’ve toppled feudal society, starting with your own humble manor. The Cruel Guardians is an epic, 187,000 word interactive fantasy novel by Samwise Harry Young, where your choices control the story. It’s entirely text-based, and fueled by the vast, unstoppable power of your imagination. - Play as Lord, Lady, or Noble; romance whoever you want. You’re the ruler, after all! - Romance a sly spymaster; a witty servant; a clever advisor; a chivalrous general; a passionate fire priest; or even the anarchist who wants to overthrow feudal society, including you. - Rule over your subjects with sympathy, pragmatism, or an iron fist. - Strive to maintain your sanity, and order in your domain as a demon tries to make you see things her way: voluntarily, or forcibly. - Read approximately 80k words per playthrough! Want to support me? Check out my other works: [Trial of the Demon Hunter](https://www.choiceofgames.com/user-contributed/trial-of-the-demon-hunter/) [Captive of Fortune](https://www.choiceofgames.com/user-contributed/captive-of-fortune/) [Foundation of Nightmares](https://www.choiceofgames.com/user-contributed/foundation-of-nightmares/) [The Magician’s Burden](https://www.choiceofgames.com/user-contributed/magicians-burden/) [The Mage’s Adventures](https://www.choiceofgames.com/user-contributed/the-mages-adventures/) [The Nascent Necromancer](https://www.choiceofgames.com/user-contributed/nascent-necromancer/) > **[Meteoric](https://www.choiceofgames.com/user-contributed/meteoric/)** > > Battle depression and poverty with the power of friendship and heavy metal music—and a demon-possessed mic! ---
**Author:** ![Empress\_Nightmare](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/empress_nightmare/32/153254_2.png) [@Empress\_Nightmare](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Empress_Nightmare)\ **Post date:** [October 29, 2022, 5:09am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-cruel-guardians/127131/2 "2022-10-29T05:09:24Z")
Damn… Nine chapters. Nice work. ---
**Author:** ![Big\_fan1231](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/b/b5ac83/32.png) [@Big\_fan1231](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Big_fan1231)\ **Post date:** [October 29, 2022, 5:49am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-cruel-guardians/127131/3 "2022-10-29T05:49:06Z")
Oh wow!! You have been updating a lot today @Samuel_H_Young. How long have you been working on this? ---
**Author:** ![Samuel\_H\_Young](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/samuel_h_young/32/275765_2.png) [@Samuel\_H\_Young](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Samuel_H_Young)\ **Post date:** [October 29, 2022, 6:06am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-cruel-guardians/127131/4 "2022-10-29T06:06:02Z")
Roughly a year, off and on. ---
**Author:** ![Big\_fan1231](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/b/b5ac83/32.png) [@Big\_fan1231](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Big_fan1231)\ **Post date:** [October 29, 2022, 7:02am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-cruel-guardians/127131/5 "2022-10-29T07:02:55Z")
Thats impressive, and you just released Necromancer. Is this the complete demo then or you will add? ---
**Author:** ![Samuel\_H\_Young](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/samuel_h_young/32/275765_2.png) [@Samuel\_H\_Young](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Samuel_H_Young)\ **Post date:** [October 29, 2022, 7:20am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-cruel-guardians/127131/6 "2022-10-29T07:20:23Z")
There’s still a huge amount to come. I’ve listed the chapters, including the future ones, in the original post. ---
**Author:** ![Tams](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/t/278dde/32.png) [@Tams](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Tams)\ **Post date:** [October 29, 2022, 9:13am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-cruel-guardians/127131/7 "2022-10-29T09:13:34Z")
Very interesting story concepts and generally quite well written. Noticed a couple of bugs, particularly being unable to set the name of the male puppy (it seems to be stuck as ‘?’), but nothing significant. I’ll be keeping this one on my watchlist and look forward to reading more. ---
**Author:** ![Frieza](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/frieza/32/133071_2.png) [@Frieza](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Frieza)\ **Post date:** [October 29, 2022, 9:44am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-cruel-guardians/127131/8 "2022-10-29T09:44:40Z")
Flai is just the best haha. Everything she does is wholesome Just got to the back-walk massage too 😁😆 ---
**Author:** ![Servant\_of\_choices](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/servant_of_choices/32/167243_2.png) [@Servant\_of\_choices](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Servant_of_choices)\ **Post date:** [October 29, 2022, 11:31am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-cruel-guardians/127131/9 "2022-10-29T11:31:24Z")
Great to have you back samuel , great to have you back. ---
**Author:** ![Samuel\_H\_Young](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/samuel_h_young/32/275765_2.png) [@Samuel\_H\_Young](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Samuel_H_Young)\ **Post date:** [October 29, 2022, 12:29pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-cruel-guardians/127131/10 "2022-10-29T12:29:56Z")
> [@Tams](#): > > Noticed a couple of bugs, particularly being unable to set the name of the male puppy (it seems to be stuck as ‘?’), but nothing significant. This should be fixed now. ---
**Author:** ![Two-Bit](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/two-bit/32/197179_2.png) [@Two-Bit](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Two-Bit)\ **Post date:** [October 29, 2022, 12:51pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-cruel-guardians/127131/11 "2022-10-29T12:51:24Z")
I noticed that our relationship with the demon increases almost every time we’re nice to animals and eat food without animal products, so now I picture her as That Vegan Teacher. ---
**Author:** ![Two-Bit](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/two-bit/32/197179_2.png) [@Two-Bit](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Two-Bit)\ **Post date:** [October 29, 2022, 2:24pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-cruel-guardians/127131/12 "2022-10-29T14:24:19Z")
Just finished chapter nine. Yup. That Vegan Teacher is my faceclaim for Jelok. Anyway, here are some mistakes that I noticed: ![Wrong Pronouns](https://global.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/original/3X/f/7/f7799e6c8c9e38827a59b2090d5eb518d8eedfba.png) **(Ch. 6)** Gelin refers to Jelok as he/him. ![Wrong Name](https://global.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/original/3X/7/f/7fe5b62ec38060bb909f56d2d482cf3721a9f24f.png) **(Ch. 8)** ${name} should be ${horse}. ---
**Author:** ![Samuel\_H\_Young](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/samuel_h_young/32/275765_2.png) [@Samuel\_H\_Young](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Samuel_H_Young)\ **Post date:** [October 29, 2022, 2:28pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-cruel-guardians/127131/13 "2022-10-29T14:28:08Z")
@Two-Bit Thanks for pointing those out. I originally had Jelok be a male, so I knew there would be some pronouns I missed. ---
**Author:** ![SDS597](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/sds597/32/140665_2.png) [@SDS597](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/SDS597)\ **Post date:** [October 29, 2022, 2:40pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-cruel-guardians/127131/14 "2022-10-29T14:40:28Z")
Love the premise and will check it out as soon as possible! ---
**Author:** ![Otaku\_Mode](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/otaku_mode/32/150851_2.png) [@Otaku\_Mode](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Otaku_Mode)\ **Post date:** [October 29, 2022, 3:39pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-cruel-guardians/127131/15 "2022-10-29T15:39:16Z")
Love it 😍🥰 ---
**Author:** ![Big\_fan1231](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/b/b5ac83/32.png) [@Big\_fan1231](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Big_fan1231)\ **Post date:** [October 29, 2022, 5:52pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-cruel-guardians/127131/16 "2022-10-29T17:52:52Z")
Oh that explains it, i got confised whether Jelok was male or female ---
**Author:** ![Gapaot](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/gapaot/32/139181_2.png) [@Gapaot](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Gapaot)\ **Post date:** [October 29, 2022, 6:35pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-cruel-guardians/127131/17 "2022-10-29T18:35:17Z")
Found a bug. I picked spending 400 bushels for the repairs, yet the text shows both my and another option results later when I talk to Flai. ![image](https://global.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/original/3X/4/3/43925dbd55dacfb23200ba1a8281be56d288a4a5.png) after the dance, this transition is just weird, is that supposed to be ‘s’ here? ![image](https://global.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/original/3X/3/2/3259d821878828b98f50632bc534b96e75c6d2b9.png) Bug: does not register that I do posess stats needed (Intelligence) ![image](https://global.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/original/3X/5/3/53442fa72d865c73ea3726acc5ae37f462a89a13.png) ![image](https://global.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/original/3X/1/6/1685a2c56f87e9187d742c64547aa2dff305dfbc.png) also, this is long story with amazing writing, so can we have some more save slots? ten, or so? ---
**Author:** ![Gapaot](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/gapaot/32/139181_2.png) [@Gapaot](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Gapaot)\ **Post date:** [October 29, 2022, 8:10pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-cruel-guardians/127131/19 "2022-10-29T20:10:06Z")
To the less technical part, I adore the characters. Jester is wonderfully cunning yet plays fool way too well sometimes. Priest is decent and pious fellow. Flai is absolutely wonderful to play with and I hope she’s romanceable. Amount of different options and ways to slowly shape the main character via the incremental choices is amazing. And this demon satyr? is quite wonderful even if I only got to speak in the latest chapter before the end. ---
**Author:** ![Dragomer](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/dragomer/32/162730_2.png) [@Dragomer](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Dragomer)\ **Post date:** [October 29, 2022, 10:48pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-cruel-guardians/127131/20 "2022-10-29T22:48:59Z")
Around what era of feudalism is the game supposed to take place in? It will probably influence my views of the anarchs quite a lot since a lot of their demands were literally not logistically, economically or physically possible during the early days of feudalism. Also it’s funny how both your character and Emyla’s debate doesn’t actually touch on what’s actually most important for the people: Which system would be better at not having them starve. ---
**Author:** ![Fenrir1](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/fenrir1/32/160490_2.png) [@Fenrir1](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Fenrir1)\ **Post date:** [October 29, 2022, 10:53pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-cruel-guardians/127131/21 "2022-10-29T22:53:18Z")
Are you thinking of adding a cheat mode? [Next page](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-cruel-guardians/127131.md?page=2)