The Cruel Guardians [9 Chapters, 166k Words]

You can just edit your stats with inspect element.

Do you know how to do that on phone ive been trying for an hour

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I found a bug where I can’t pass an Intelligence check despite having the required amount.

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I’m really enjoying the story so far and the very tense balancing act I’ve got going on with my council. Also this is pretty crazy but my first dog was a black male with a white chest named Rascal.

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I can haz both Nadine and Flai? :flushed:

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I’d say it’s something like the 1300s.

Emyla does point out that with anarchy, the farmers could keep all the crops they harvested rather than giving half of them to a noble. The fuedalist argument is that they’re better at organizing and protection.

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Combat-wise, are we sticking with the spear for the duration or will we have an opportunity to switch to another melee weapon?

I originally planned on just having the crossbow and spear, but I can add more weapons if there’s a demand for it.

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Caught a coding snafu in chapter three - the very last line, where Flai mentions the windows, gives both the positive and negative reactions, regardless of what was actually selected:

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This was really impressive, I enjoyed the story and your writing style. Never thought I’d enjoy playing as a noble in charge of territory but here we are/

I look forward to your future updates

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True I guess but I took it more as a ‘justice’ argument since if stopping people from starving was as easy as letting them keep their crops, we’d have never moved on from tribalism or created merchant.

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I actually have you discuss this with the king in Chapter 2 and he talks about how feudalism sprung out of rivalries between proto anarchist tribes and imperialist slavers.

I’m really digging the game and the amount of animals your allowed to have around you feels sweet even with the grim feudalism and loopy demon problems.

Jelok’s pretty interesting though looking forward to seeing how your relationship with her can progress :smile:. Though i’m encountering a bit of a problem with this, the game both refers to her as him too sometimes, dunno if that’s a glitch or not.

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Yeah, Jelok used to be a male but I switched her to female early on. If you see her being referred to as a male, I’d love if you could point those out so I can squash those typos.

Minor update:

  • A handful of bugs and typos that testers have pointed out have been fixed
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found an error in chapter 2 ( chapter3ctg line 469: Non-existent variable ‘board’ ) when I was talking to Flai. can’t show you a pic cause I forgot to take a screenshot…

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found an error

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@Reeves @Yuugay0334
Thanks, that’s fixed now.

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Thank you!!

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this seems relevant somehow

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Im done… :melting_face: i tried anything to make indpect element work on phone but it dont work

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