@jmar Hello! I don’t have exact ages in mind but I believe in the demo it says older than 18 but younger than mid twenties? I can’t remember the exact range but I’m pretty sure it’s close to that.
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Bizimo
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Really great demo. I love the chars. The best about that demo is the atmosphere. I’m glad I found this demo
+1x bookmark
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jmar
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Oh okay at first I thought they were children based off how the beginning was written, but that makes more sense
This is an incredible WIP! I cant wait to see more!
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Glad to have tried this, so happy to see the range of emotions we can pick for our MC - that is part of what makes a game personal to me, which is greatly appreciated - by me, at least. Keep it up, please. 
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Ririsu1
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Can’t pick any choices don’t know if it’s just me or not
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Okay, I think I know the problem. I’ll try to fix it soon! 
Thanks for pointing it out.
peaches
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Found a wonky variable 
Really enjoyed the demo!
I do have a question though, it seems like Ollie/Oliver/Lilly have a crush on MC no matter what. Will they eventually get jealous if you flirt with other ROs?
I’m glad you enjoyed it! I plan to have jealousy scenes if you activate scenes with different ROs. Right now, I don’t plan to have Ollie/Oliver/Lily be jealous without the MC pursuing them but they might act a little sad in the beginning.
Which is more reasonable than them being jealous because although, they have liked the MC since they could remember, they never told the MC. While if they were sad, it would be because they were use to being the MC’s only friend. I hope that makes sense and answers your question
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oort
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i seriously adore this wip! little question tho. when it comes to romance, do we have to dive straight into it now, or can we let their relationship develop first and then pick some romantic options down the road? or are the romantic choices we have at the beginning our only chances of pursuing a romance with an lo?
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I’m really glad you like it! And to answer your question, you can definitely wait until later on to pick the more romantic options, the choices now just activates it faster. I still have to map an outline but hopefully I can plan more variations so that it’ll work out more smoothly : )
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oort
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i’m glad to hear that! thank u so much for responding, and for creating such a wonderful game c:
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Of course! I’m happy to answer any questions or talk about anything if you want 
and I’m glad you like it so much! It’s always nice to hear people enjoying the content I create, it helps to keep me motivated.
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I LOVE THIS I LOVE HOW OLIVER IS PROTECTIVE OF ME I JUST LOVE THAT YOU CAN CHOOSE TO BE PROTECTIVE OR HE/SHE IS PROTECTIVE OF YOU.
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system
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I have once again impulsively decided to update! Although Chapter One is way shorter than the original, the new one is only at 10,000, I do hope it doesn’t feel as rushed as before. I have decided to focus on content rather than word count and I hope it shows.
Thank you all for sticking by me and I hope you like the new Chapter One!
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Glad you picked this up again, I played through the old demo many times and enjoyed it.
Didn’t really feel rushed to me.
Vashnik
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In this scene, Chris’ name appears before he introduces himself
Summary
“Where did you get those?” he asks. “I’ve always told Aila I wanted them but she never got them for me.” Chris visibly slumps, bending down to inspect your awesome shoes.
“Sorry for not introducing myself formally,” he says, walking towards you. He stops a foot away, bowing.
“I’m Chris,” he introduces, meeting your eyes with a smug smirk
Ririsu1
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Welcome back to the forums love the demo these were some things I found
“As if taunting you”
This might just be me but the sentence describing Olivia would be better as “You wonder if she just looks different because instead of her”
