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CHAPTER ONE UPDATE
After ages of procrastinating, I finally pushed myself to update the story! 
Chapter One is still a draft—definitely not perfect—but it’s a much more thought-out version than before. I figured it’s better to have something rough I can polish over time than to keep beating myself up in silence. So here it is, a work-in-progress, but one I’m finally moving forward with. Progress is progress, right? 
Here’s the: DEMO
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Glad to see progress, can’t wait to see more!
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So far a very fun read, and I can’t wait to see what else you have in store!
Small bug I noticed: while I played with a female MC & sibling, the story refered to Arlan as a ‘he’ multiple times.
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There is a bug involving *, I believe you wanted to make it bold or italic, but it ended up * * like this * *
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same no matter what i do
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Same issue for me, which is odd. It was working fine last night.
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Yeah, about that. Totally my fault, sorry for that, I was doing some minor fixes and removed the old file and I didn’t realised the new one hadn’t loaded properly. It should be fixed now.
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I’m so glad you came back with this!
I can’t wait to finally expose dear Branton and Merindah for what they did! Please tell me it will be as soon as possible!
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Glad you back, hope to see you again in next chapter
Stay healthy
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I really enjoyed the updated demo. This story combines all the great elements of epic fantasy, great houses, mystical religions/prophecy, romance, rivalry, etc. Even though it is inspired by ASIOAF and Harry Potter a little bit with the map, it has its own authenticity and uniqueness and the writing is beautiful. I was wondering if we will find out what our family looks like, because I know Basilius has blue green eyes and silver hair but don’t know much about the mother, father, and Drystan.
Also who is Helenyna Montague? Is she Basilius’s betrothed or just a noble that he grew up with and is his sweetheart?
Thanks and can’t wait for more!
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Seem to be seeing the word “centrer” a lot, instead of either centre or center
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Excellent work, will keep a close eye on this one. Cheers.
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