The Bar on the Abyss - WIP [240k words] [Version 2.0 released on August 16]

Three spirits walk into a bar…

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Hi everyone! Came back from holiday and working on another update already, see you soon :slight_smile:

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Just played for the first time (or might have played when it was just the prologue and chapter 1) and really enjoyed it! All the characters are interesting and a delight and I am so gripped by the mystery!

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Just played for the first time (or might have played when it was just the prologue and chapter 1) and really enjoyed it! All the characters are interesting and a delight and I am so gripped by the mystery!

Thank you for reading and providing feedback! Happy you enjoyed it :heart:

Writing a mystery as a long-term project with updates in installments turned out to be quite a test of patience for me. Holding all the cards in my lonely echo chamber and going insane :japanese_ogre:

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after some postponed… i finally finished the demo (ch4 as of now)
there are bit of typos / mismatch pronouns then and there.
but the rest is good. feel like a good break after some heavy stuff.
keep up the good work

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Thank you for the feedback! I’m glad you enjoyed it. Finding all the typos is a never-ending struggle, lol. One must imagine oneself as Sisyphus… :smiling_face_with_tear:

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