If you end up pulling Starling, I may end up entering that one manually because I’m really attached to that one for some reason. Starlings are cute little birds! Of course I’d like that as a name.
Aw, don’t be too down on yourself.
Nothing you wrote ever came off as illegible. Not once!
I’ll be glad to help if you want me to. Did you want me to place the screenshots, and offered fixes here, or in a DM to keep from cluttering this WIP thread? Either/Or would work for me, but the plus for here is that anyone can double-check my recommendations, and make a few suggestions themselves in case there’s something that sounds better than what I put forward.
If that doesn’t work with your confidence level, though, plenty of authors here on the forum do these kinds of checks/fixes through DMs instead.
Oh, but fair warning: part of my “editing style” is that I like to give the author options as far as possible fixes go so that there’s room for maintaining the author’s personal flair in both word choice, and cadence.