Like the new update. This is probably my favourite WiP at the moment. The cultural touches are wonderful, especially with the Markov/a choice. I hope you’re ok with me making a few comments, don’t mean to come across as nit-picky or anything, just things that seemed a bit jarring or incomplete.
During the casino scene at the beginning, the MC has the choice to charm Frau Bergmann into letting them upstairs. They talk a bit, Bergmann uses rather colloquial language at the end, and MC follows her upstairs. And then she disappears. I found that a bit disjointed since with the way things were going and the inclusive tone of “come on” I’d expect her to at least make some parting comment once there.
Would MC get a chance to tell the Director about the do svidaniya comment? It sounded like a threat, and would probably be rather vital and useful information, but MC doesn’t seem to think much of it afterwards.
“Did I tell you about Petrovich’s crocodiles?” Angel says, pervesely upbeat.
The signal for both is routed through your phone, camoflagued by the mobile signal.
through the fanfare and self-aggrandisment