Dunno if typos count as bugs? (Do they?) But i found this:
(I was playing as a nimble butler btw)
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Very fun read. I’ve made GLaDOS ( Strict, Inconspicuous, Elegant, *Investigator) and it went just as well as I’ve expected it to. Cool setting, nice PoV that is rarely used in games, I very much look forward to finished product
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Didn’t expect it wouldn’t have an option given the context but would a nonbinary choice be too big an ask? As well as perhaps the ability to pick outfit separate from gender
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this might just be a nitpick from me, but I personally think a more natural way to the phrase the question, “Does Lady Titania can’t eat meat?” would be:
“Does Lady Titania not eat meat?”
or
“Can Lady Titania not eat meat?”
or
“Lady Titania can’t eat meat?”
the way the question currently is worded looks unnatural to me
or maybe I’m being dumb
it happens lol
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The thing was when I started the prologue I didn’t even know how to add gender choice (this is my first foray into CS and coding in general). I’m more confident now so I think NB choice should be able to come soon-ish.
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Thanks. You’re right. My ESL brain didn’t catch that.
Cute PFP, btw.
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Ah, balls. Thanks for the spot.
thanks for the compliment! I drew it myself! :]
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Fixed some stuff.
Added a non-binary option (kinda. I think gender identities get murky when you’re dealing with non humans). Please inform me if you spot an errant pronoun.
Added trait descriptions.
Also, thanks to the suggestions I got here and other places, I’ve already had solid ideas for all the RIs and ROs. thanks.
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The game looks good!!
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I want to ask how sentient is this golem? There seem to be lack of directive control as for now the priority is to protect little Zara, everything else is secondary or not important.
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We’re a self learning continuously evolving artificial organism. We’re just a baby now, but we’re slowly getting independence. I’m planning to have a decent amount of ‘power of love’ theme, so later we’ll be able to learn what love is through the ROs.
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So still baby like mind hmm.
Interesting to see how this develop.
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I gotta say I’m really excited to see more of this! I’ve always enjoyed the overpowered butler troupe and this is the only time I’ve ever seen it used like this I’m look forward to seeing more!
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A M A Z I N G 
excited for more
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That is the sacrifice for drip.
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I think the golem plating whatever it is already insanely durable enough without having lousy plate armor which obviously lower grade armor than what already available.
But I understand if that’s for the style it is make sense, but probably doesn’t suit the servant position and probably make the golem really stand out instead of blending in, huge disadvantage when doing sneaky business, while it doesn’t encumber the golem it probably add considerable weight that walking on the tiled roof could collapse it.
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Well, like I said, could just be an option when choosing what to wear at the start and for drip it is always worth it.
I know this is a dumb thing to ask but do we look human
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Apparently people can tell we’re golem so aesthetically we’re very much have distinctive feature that make us not human looking.
Probably issue for later when MC start gaining personality of their own right now MC still in factory setting mode not much going on but to obey little miss, probably later MC will deal with their own way of perceiving things.
Author said MC currently still baby in mind.
Probably will help to imagine if author give rough sketch on how MC look. Regardless of hair/skin color I think author need to give visual on how the golem look.
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