Yeah alex was my first choice at first before I met the others but I could never really see my chracter being with a hero type so I kinda left that idea at the door and turned more to the other characters.
I think some sort of slap slap kiss affair with Damon during the game would be something that has the potential to be a lot of fun with hopefully a chance to really get together and get serious during the present day sequences so I still have something to acheive during those sequences as well.
Oh and Alex of course. The handsome hero always wins and all that, except that we know he doesn’t in the present-day sequences of course.
I agree with @idonotlikeusernames, I really want to see Damon unravel from that smug, no nonsense attitude of his into something more human 
I can picture a scene happening where the MC or one of the characters get hurt in combat and there’s this big emotional outburst–I was thinking either Owen or Damon, but it could happen between any of the characters depending on who is the one hurt
Everything is great the diverse characters, interesting story, and the dialoge feels natural. I can’t wait to see the villian’s personality and how the characters interactions. If you keep this up this will be my new favorite story.
I love the story so far! cant wait for more!!
At this part, it would seem like either the MC or Alex would say something sassy about the “is this your girlfriend” statement, i.e. Alex: I wish. MC: In your dreams. What do you think?
“I think you’re right,” Sam says, laughing. “Is this your girlfriend?” “This is Commander Avery Brennan. I actually took a leave of absence, and I’m working for her now. Avery, this is Sam Harker. We were on the force together back in Smyrna before his wife got a job at one of the big advertising firms and dragged him up North.”
I just played this, and I got so sucked into it straightaway, it took me by surprise. I loved the pacing of it, and recruiting people. I only noticed one grammatical error (“you’re” instead of “your”) but can’t remember where it took place. :-/ One thing I really like is how each character has their own voice, and you can really see that throughout.
I do have a thing for Owen as well, that was right from the start.
Very through and detailed, I’m looking forward for more, The witty remarks are even better, I wonder if it’s possible to have your own character like… modified? So that you can be a meta-human aswell.
@MichaelDan - I’m loving the witty remarks as well! “I don’t give a damn if you want to ask him to Homecoming.” 
I gave my base an extremely inappropriate name OTL
Why would you need to be a meta human as a regular human you kick their butts making you 100 time more badass cuz you use your own abilities
I still wish we had meta human abilities that we hid until in die neeed and then when you use them everyone would be like ‘WHAT!!’
@Ninjasplaycardgames2 I am now really curious as to what you named it, but at the same time, I’m not sure I want to know.
Update News
Sorry I’ve been gone so long, school has been kicking my ass lately. To make up for my absence, please enjoy an update, and let me know what y’all think.
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/86817576/web/mygame/index.html
Damon’s flashback is officially finished, which puts me at like 1/8 of the way through the game. Yay progress!
As always I appreciate the kind words, and I get such a kick out of reading what you guys have to say about all of the characters. You guys are the best 
I’m still enjoying this as much as when I first played it. Owen is still my favourite, but I’m quite fond of Damon, too. At the moment my character is a right flirt! I love the detail, and I cannot wait to see how this develops and pans out.
Gods I love Sarah. I plan to make the enemy tap out from just us being awesome. (And several knock out darts. No I don’t need to use several, but I plan on it.)
I really love this game.
I noticed a slight error in Grammar during the talk with Alex.
“pretty soon we-re going to be hero-ing it up all over the world”
I think “we-re” is supposed to be “we’re.”
Oh, and there’s also a typo here:
“Not really. I’ve been qiote busy this past decade, and I’ve never been a social man.”
@ErinRosado I’m glad you like it. The flirty stuff is my absolute favorite part to write.
@FallingCups I think that’s an excellent plan.
@RedRoses Thanks for the corrections; I’ll make sure to have them fixed next time I update.
Awsome as always