Very good so far. I notice when I go to recruit John that I have the option of bringing Alex or Owen, but I haven’t recruited Owen yet. I recruited Alex first, then Kat.
I’m still trying to figure out what a bidet is for… That’s great - I just fell off my chair laughing, and then I realised that I’m actually not sure what it’s for myself.
grammar error: “Anyone else people planning to kill you we should know about?”
don’t need people in that sentence
@Smeet I think Sarah’s mission is the only one that actually checks to see who you’ve recruited. I left it off the other ones because I wanted it to be easier for people to beta test.
Thanks for the catch, it should be fixed now!
Your story is really great! I was just wondering how old the characters are when they’re teaming up? Thanks! 
@jellisthompson I don’t really have particular ages in mind for the characters so much as age ranges. Kat’s 22, Alex is in his mid-20s, Damon and Sara are in their mid to late 20s, and John and Owen are in their late 20s/early 30s.
Gots to got more
@FortunesFaded I think the MC being in their late twenties makes the most sense, but it’s really up to the player.
@darkstar2101 Hopefully soon
In other words, MC is in their mid late twenties to early thirties, give or take a few. 
@Dolphinzgirl - Not much feedback to offer other than I think your story-telling so far flows really well, so keep it up. Oh, and Happy New Year in case I don’t make it… …here again before next year. 
I just wanted to say I really love the game so far Im usually lazy to comment but I just wanted you to know this is like, one of the best Ive played so far.
A lot of times I get bored especially in the beginning, but I think the way you tell the story makes it really enjoyable. Nice job
Like Honeycake, I don’t usually comment(sad considering I’ve been here for 2 years) but I just really wanted you to know that this game is CRAZY GOOD! You’re definitely one of the best writers here! No kidding, this game is sooo well written that I’d pay any amount to play it. I’m obsessed with this game! Aside from the writing, one of the best part of this game are the characters. I love each and every one the characters. They are so fascinating! Though I die a little inside when there aren’t any updates, take your time because I know it must take a lot of energy and time to make a game as amazing as this.
Keep up the awesome work and have a happy new year!
Mid to late twenties/early thirties… just like Shepard ;D *giggles madly as she stirs the pot*
@Dolphinzgirl Give me bad metahumans, kiss ass heroes with complex personalities, travel, missions, guns, car chases, spy type intrigue, an extremely wealthy backer, humor, snark AND romance…yeah, I’m hooked! Keep eatin’ your Wheaties because what you are doing is working *pats on back* (*)
Curse you @Dolphinzgirl for making all your characters so unbelievably irresistible! I can not stop flirting with all your characters, they are all so cute and well made! Gosh, what’s a girl to do 
By the by, I kinda would like to know a lil bit more about John… I may flirt with everyone but I notice who I’m flirting with and John is very interesting… a little insight on his romance perhaps? ;D
I love playing the game. Very well written
Yeah I want to see more of John too, can we flirt so outrageously that we can see him sqirm?!
I really enjoyed playing this! At first I thought it was going to be a simple story about a Navy commander(so funny you added Shepard as a last name!), but then BOOM! The mission was revealed. Instantly made me think of AHS! I look forward to more!
@JTAL Thanks so much, and a happy New Year to you, too!
@Honeycake It meas a lot that you took the time to comment, I’m glad you like it.
@choiceofkylen You are the sweetest. Characters are my favorite thing to write, and the next segment should really let me dig in to their heads some more. Also, hopefully, I’ll have a little update soon.
@Scrivener It’s a good age.
@piggleywinks I will endeavor to put in even more of those things.
@CrimsonRose301 Yay for flirting! It tends to be my favorite part of any game that has it, so I’m glad I’m giving back, as it were.
If Team Zero were the Care Bears, John would be Grumpy Bear. He’s cynical, surly, and rarely happy (of course you can help him with that if you so choose). Because he’s so taciturn and frankly bad at feelings, John’s romance is definitely a slower burn than some of the others; you have a lot of walls you have to get through first. I can’t say too much at this point, but I will say that you can have an impact on his outlook on life and his romance can end up quite sweet.
@Countryreb94 Thanks!
@Roslyn_samalt06 You should get some pretty good insight into John’s character during the next sequence of the game. As for making John squirm I might do something like that. The idea is giving me all kinds of plot bunnies.
@Outrageous Yay, that was pretty much exactly the reaction I was going for. I wanted the superhero angle to come as a bit of twist.
Pretty cool and when do the other choices are done like going to the garden or is it all scripted linear?
@jcsunshine_3 The flashback sequences will be playable in just about any order. Basically, you pick someone to talk to, playthrough the flashback, and then go talk to someone else, so you could end up playing the game chronologically or Pulp FIction style depending on what order you talk to people. At the same time, the present day story is playing out, which is linear.
@Dolphinzgirl - Despite knowing how it will end I can’t help but liking Alex, possibly because he is a bit like me (except he has superpowers, ha!). And a good tragedy is, uh, a good tragedy, no? =(( Plus that last option that you can tell him your superpower is was a laugh, ha! I like to laugh and to make people laugh!
Keep up the good work, really looking forward to your future creations. :-bd