I am really liking this!! I didn’t get to finish it because of my dumb internet, but I got pretty hooked! even despite there not being many options. but the story can get away with it because the characters feel alive and draw you in. There are some misspellings here and there but the main thing is that the text switches between present and past tense. for example: “his hair is black” when it should be “his hair was black” since most of the text is written in past tense (which I really like btw!). So that is the main thing that will probably take a while to fix. But wow! great job! I can’t wait to finish the rest! so keep working at it 
Oh, I like 'em all, depending on how I play the game. 
…and if all we get is flirting I’ll take that too. That’s so much fun too. 
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@sweetheart Thank you! Have no fear this lazy frog is still writing 
@yagamikuuno yeah, I guess my partner really is good at making characters lols. 
I think my partner will be possessive with Rubar 
hehehe @Outrageous she made Rubar daft because she can’t stomach the thought the he will eventually need a partner lols. Oh, that is an error, fix that already. Thanks for the bug report.
@RockStarPenguin Thank you, enjoy the game! 
I limit choice, I don’t want to get too overwhelmed, especially if I need to think of different outcomes. Hopefully when this progress then I can try to expound it more.
I posted this answer, hope this can satisfy about those problem.
Oh and guys! Thanks for the likes 
my very first post with the game link, I got a badge! people a badge for it 
now I’m writing getting motivated lols 
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@honeymichie I hope you didn’t mistake what I said about there not being many options! It wasn’t a complaint at all! more a complement because most games have a lack without the options but just saying yours is different but in a good way! hope that makes sense! 
the characters and story can stand on it’s own
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@honeymichie since there is no yusuf Fangirl, i am so jumping on the yusef wagon! 
Well Logan is still my number one 
Hi guys hope you’re all well and good! Here is the full update for phase three and four! I’m now half way done writing phase five! 
ChoiceScript does have a save function that you have to copy and paste the code, but I didn’t understand it and it was uber long! 
Like where am I supposed to save that thingy? So I begged my partner another type of save points for the game.
Good news! @Aera made a save point thingy with something from someone else program I think. The bad news for the save thingy is that your save could possibly not work if the game is updated, which will happen because the game we’re making is still a work in progress. (I’m praying to finish!) 
Happy day’s guys! And as usual bug reports are appreciated. 
@RockStarPenguin Ah okay, okay.
@GloriaRose Lols 
Yusef is a prankster. 
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Herro! love the new update, but every time I try to play from the beginning I’m sent to the first chapter then I’m skipped a head to the fourth. Plus the age and skills are pre-set to 0.
hello the game is amazing. There is a slight slip though in the school after asking the mountains of questions: “Juran,” one of the boys quickly said. “You said we’re only hear to scare them right?” shouldn’t be here but thats just me nitpicking. MORE NITPICKING! The screen after Phase 1 when you leave the save option area, instead of Phase 2 whatever can’t remember; Phase 4 with it’s title is written in block capitals on the empty page (it is just that short sentence). AND there feels to be a large part of the old stuff is simply missing. there is none of the first school day stuff or the family bondage or the meeting of yusef and amber.
It just continues with this: “School is still the same; your classmates still avoids you and Amber. Whispering behind your back how dirty you both are. Logan reminded you to not mind the snobs and Yusef even joked that if those kids won’t stop sticking their nose up it will become permanently turn up.”
if that is chapter 4 then why are is there STILL the ENTIRE questioning section about the lore creature still there and their mating ritual?
Please let me to slaughter Beatrice and Juran!!! I hate them i wish to torture and kill them in unimaginable ways!!! 
I will not play this game without possibility to obtain my brutal revenge!! 
First i wish to beat them making them to beg me! After that i will proceed with torture!
I think you made a mistake: soon after you play phase 1 it goes straight at the beginning of phase 4. Plus the age stat is still 0. On the other hand, I really love the game and think you’re doing a tremendous job!
@yagamikuuno A bug? 
I have to PM my partner about the bugs, I think she in her time its midnight? Not sure will try to PM her, but I think she fixed some bugs.
@MasterChief117John A bug that I need to PM to my partner asap lols thanks for the bug reports. Must be on the part four for lesson with the race not the same on phase three will check it if code error. family bondage??? Whaa? 
@Abyss Hahaha if you try to befriend Beatrice she does have redeeming qualities. Juran let’s wait for the update for that. 
@Phoenix_The_Pirate A bug noted and fixed. Thanks, enjoy the game.
Fixed the bugs, report if it still there. 
Beatrice is a bitch i wish to destroy her!! Will be possible to select you own draconis? I personaly i like black dragons.
Yes I too am getting tired oh hearing Beatrice snide remarks and us not doing anything about it.
Wow I think you should calm down just a bit friend.
@Abyss Nope, you can’t choose them you have to do an eeny, meeny, miny, moe. When you choose an egg that is if you can become an official drágóneer. But watch the egg colour or the egg outer look.
@vampierkid222 In life there will be people like Beatrice or Juran, but revenge is sweeter when you plan for it.
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Why!? This arrogant bitch is treat me like a scum!
But is not possibility to choose the egg? Sorry is confusion i see is possible to choose the egg.
The eggs will be in one room and you do the eeny, meeny, miny, moe. So yes you can choose the egg, but not know what type of baby lizard it will have, but again you must be an official drágóneer or no baby lizard for you. Still of your friends got maybe you can ask them to share the baby lizard.
I will transform my dragon into an evil beast!