Taika
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I got this error after choosing any ability (I tried all the options, same error), and after Orlando says the two guys the MC murdered deserve it. There is no next button, so seems like all new players would get stuck here.
Some things!
After picking Male specimen.
“He’s been in a coma-like state since the beginning,” Savio continued, without looking up. “Not only that- I know next to nothing about her past life- no name, no home, no family- hell, I can’t even approximate the Alpha’s age.”
Okay for some reason after picking my disability, and its time to pick my ability. I get an error when trying to load the statscreen.
" choicescript_stats line 13: Non-existent variable ‘natural_talent’ "
Thats what i get, i also cant get out of the statscreen unless i load a save or restart. I get the same error after i pick my ability, just changes the Ability: Unknown to whatever it is i picked.
Found this error? When you select the smash down wall option, it comes up saying something like incorrect option 0 is 3? Not sure what this means, is there an error with the game code?
Interesting story, here is some bugs and grammar errors I have found.
He paused, furrowing his brow. “It was almost liked he belonged there.”
like
Who’d have ever thunk that Alpha’s are almost as hard to track down as a Castior?”
thought, castor
Your gaze drifts to the furthest wall, where ancient weapons metal weapons hang upon gilded shelves.
repetition
The cieling above you spins in and out of focus as you gasp for breath.
ceiling
It flies down the back of my spine until my can’t even feel the pain
I
After the encounter with the guy with fire powers clicking show stats make '‘Choicescript_stats line 13: Non-existent variable ‘natural_talent’’ appear and make it impossible to progress
…sliced two B-level’s necks off of their heads with a piece with just a switchblade
I dont know how to correct it but that sentence is wrong.
Yeah, I get how putting those two together can be kind of difficult. I’ll have to think of a better way to explain it.
All of the error and grammar problems should be fixed by now. I went through every one that was mentioned. Also, some parts of chapter one were tweaked slightly. No major changes, but enough to add some depth. I’ll post the new link now, because I’m going to be away from my laptop until Saturday-ish.
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/243030709/Tainted-%20The%20Revolution/web/mygame/index.html
Some things that aren’t done:
- The blind MC. I don’t recommend taking this path until I find a way to describe it better.
- Chapter Two. Time constraints are prohibiting me from doing as I originally planned, so it’ll have to wait until I come back.
Other than that, everything should be in working order.
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visionfire line 405: increasing indent not allowed, expected 1 was 2
A page after the MC dodges out of the way/tries to talk their way out of the situation, this error pops up and I can’t proceed further.
visionfire line 224: Non_existent variable ‘has _khopesh’
also, I loaded a save but it made me restart the game instead AND keep my stat, meaning I could break the door again to become stronger than I’m supposed to (I think)
visionfire line 405: increasing indent not allowed, expected 1 was 2
picking dodge and clicking next and i got that.
tried to load
Uncaught Error: visionfire line 408: invalid line; this line should have a scene name followed by an error message: *goto scream
This is a common bug that’s known to happen with the save feature on any WIP using it if the games code changes from when your save was actually made. There’s nothing that can be done for that other than delete your save and make a new one, really. 
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I got a error which didn’t allow me to continue with the story, it was the
visionfire line 405: increasing ident not allowed, expected 1 was 2
To add to the other bug reports, apparently those particular error only occurs if you don’t take the gun. I did a couple playthroughs and it always happens if you don’t take the gun. However further along the story another bug appears out of nowhere with a right hook on the scene after you meet Orlando and Kane. This bug has so much knockout power unlike the previous one (which I assume was a normal avoidable jab) that it knock any sort of playthrough down for the count. So yeah this one doesn’t have any workarounds.
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Taika
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Another error pops up after you ask all the questions, and it’s this: “Our apologies; there was a 404 error while loading game data. Please refresh your browser now; if that doesn’t work, please email support-external@choiceofgames.com with details.” Not sure if it’s a coding error, or something else 'cause refreshing doesn’t seem to work.
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This is the big bad bug that doesn’t have any workarounds at all. Definitely coding (?) I guess?
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ab2wus
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I got a little excited when I read a thread about posting tricks 
This is me having fun with it.
Content is filled with images. I’m a lazy fuck. This is the result 
Error/Spoiler(maybe)
satified=satisfied
the it=it
Inconsistent gender. Chose Female. his=her
HaHaHa
Definitely like this better I’d have loved it though if there was an option that’d have the protagonist smiling instead 
I like to pretend I’m the crazy one in fantasy situations I play in my head
I never picked the gun on my first play through, but damn I should have. I am DANCING at the scene. I get to piss him off 
I like that “your eyes never waver from his face” part, it makes me very very excited for the coming face off.
Whew. So felt this line 
Oh, I still giggle over Kane and Orlando
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It makes sense that the blind runthrough would be hard to write since a blind person can’t see. so the only way the can get desriptions in the game is threw there other senses or if they have someone describe the sceen for them. For people who like to make fun of blind people I might be blind but I’m not stupid.
Wow. this seems like a really promising story. i just wish i could play it 
getting similar errors to other ppl; i cant get past the burning mansion part unless i take the gun, cant get past the kane & orlando meeting, comes up w this error-
Our apologies; there was a 404 error while loading game data. Please refresh your browser now; if that doesn’t work, please email support-external@choiceofgames.com with details.
Tried saving and reloading and it didnt help.
Seems like a great concept tho, good writing (the wake up imprisoned scene was very well done!) & i love the creative use of the ‘next’ button and the idea of having such a wide range of powers and weaknesses that could potentially have a great effect on the story.
One question, how old is Kane supposed to be? bc describing him as “a boy” to me means 16- 18 at the oldest. But im not sure he seems that young, tho Orlando calls him a kid IMO you can still call somebody in their 20s or 30s lol. Guess some clarification (ex. “a boy no older than __” would be good.
