@Katgirl64 I love this story a lot, it’s very interesting, and no doubt a very unique plot as well. All grammar problems aside, I can see the story going very, very well.
… On that note, oh if only I had a 3DS, I would have gotten FE: Awakening & Professor Layton AND Rune Factory 4, and I heard that the next Phoenix Wright game is on the 3DS as well. So if you can’t tell, I’m really on the line of either buying the PS4 or the 3DS.
@AngelOfTheBroken Harvest Moon is great, its simplicity and the way we farm and stuff is really intriguing, Rune Factory more so because of its fighting system (and I love fighting/adventure RPGs, so Rune Factory totally won me over). So the first game of Harvest Moon, by far, is my favorite. Though my favorite RF has to be the third one, simply because I have not yet played the ones on the Wii.
@random thanks.(I am so tempted to reply nali nali but I don’t know if any of you would understand) Sorry if there are any grammar mistakes I missed. If you could point them out so I can fix them that would be great. You should totally get those (and maybe a Harvest Moon: New Beginning) they really rock. Miracle Mask gave me so many feels, for three days after playing i would randomly start crying when I thought about it (true story).
Did you not notice the fact that I was the one who got off-topic? :-" @angelofthebroken Have you seen its reviews? No one (I mean NO ONE) has give it a bad one! The only cons I can think of is 1) only three save files 2) they don’t have feet (which I think is cute) 3) I have become frightfully loyal to a video game character (Chrom)
@Katgirl64
I’ll try to search better but one Typo I found a typo at the part when you meant Lyle or his lady equvalent, you put “to” instead of “the” in his/her sentence of how they wouldn’t have been able to tell if they hadn’t fell on them.
Oh I’ve been there, I was like that over Elwood. XD I have little doubt I’ll get emotionally attached. (I mean if I was diving by the end of Mass Effect 3. XP)
@Random
It is I’ve played so many versions of it! I’m excited to play the new ones that will be exclusive to 3DS my mom is brining it home since I gave her the money to give to my friend that works for her. I was always amazed how the farming never got dull.
Though got to agree with FairyGodFather, just wish the relationships were a little deeper. But that asid HM is AMAZING!
Just got back from Star Trek: Into Darkness (Kirk X Spock is my new BrOTP) so now I’ll get to work @Angeloftebroken Fixed. (By the way his name’s Lyell, it’s Norse if I remember correctly for wolf or something like that) This is what happens when you play FE:A: http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_meagpxA39j1rz1azxo1_500.jpg (I don’t know how to post images :-? ) @Happy Awww that sucks which one did you play? The best is Unwounded Future (Clive Dove :X )
I was coding the gala’s skeleton and this happened: #try to help
derp derp derp The powa of derp allow you to summon Puni, God of pudding, with his help you fill everyone’s hearts with pudding and there is world peace.
*goto shayla_dance #I don’t need him
I a gansta I don’t need nobody. You sweep that chick off her feet and give her the best night of her life.
*goto shayla_dance
*else
“Heeeeeyyy grrrrrrlll how u doin’?”
*goto damian_dance
*label shayla_dance
You dance like a ham someone threw down a flight of stairs.
*goto cousins
*label damian_dance
you dance like elvis.
*goto cousins
label cousins
“good morrow coz.”
I regret nothing. ;
On a more productive note, I figured out how to do relationship stats (mostly) the way I want to so look forward to that.
@blackheart yes and no, you do get to dance with Airel at a gala just not this one. This one’s a meet and greet with the nobles. There a scene with him cycle1 day2 that can earn you some points with him
@Katgirl64
When he says “Nither one us wants to end up died” The part after the Godmother bit. (Which makes me smirk every time~)
Might sound better if it was
“Nither one of us want’s to end up dead.”
Though not real sure on the 's
“Catch” might sound better then “Caught”
@Angelofthebroken 8-| Dang typos! Those are what I meant to say, thanks for pointing them out.
In what I have written so far everyone’s really sassy and I’m like “Aaah! You can’t ALL be sassy!”
Lolz ik how that feels when I write stories and I want some characters to be completely different and they end up being written so similar that their personalities make them seem like twins
@Kathgirl64
Trust me I do it all the time! (My Fanfics have more then a couple a typos a chapter most likely) Pft that one girl…Totaly made me think of one of my old friends. XD I pitty the MC to no end.
@blackheart I have a really hard time writing non-villain @$$holes so all of the good characters tend to be really peppy @angelofthebroken it doesn’t help that I failed most of my spelling test (thank goodness that I dont have those anymore) heehee her character’s going to get a whole lot more interesting @fallingcups yeah, that’s kinda the MC’s fault. The reason is that since they spent so much time together MC they synced up a lot unintentionally. It got the point that Airel’s thinking became “You’re going to here it anyways, might as well say it out loud!” I’m planning on adding a scene about it later by I’d have to add ones to the other two too and I want to get at least Chapter 1 before I go back and change anything.
@blackheart I’m working on it, but i’m going slower than I expected. @angelofthebroken Yay! \:D/ (I wonder if we could spotpass or something?) Have you meet (mybeautifulsweetangelbabywhoseallgrownupandisabadassandijustwanttohugwandsqueezeandgotheretheremommy’shereto) Lucina yet? Oh reclass anyone who can become a Dark Flier into one, at level 15 they get Galeforce which lets them move again when they kill someone. @2ton but usually they are trying to kill you they’re just not the main person trying to kill you.
@Katgirl64
Did that pretty often too. XD Trust me it’s not that bad. Ooooh~
On an unrelated note. Got FE:A yesterday…O.O…Not even half way through and the feels!
@Katgirl64 Writing non-villains are simple, just write them as a villain except they dont try to kill you and give them a funny mustache… those are evil! even if it’s a chick just slap a funny mustache on her and blam! instant douchey person.
which one did you play? The best is Unwounded Future (Clive Dove :X )
