Hahaha… Chaos will always spread. Soon, this thread will have RO wars!
Well, I’m willing to help with *line_breaks and *page_breaks, since the “huge text blobs” is my anti-speciality 
And BTW, can we just drop the topic about @Sophia and RO wars at the neighboring WIP already?
I don’t think there’ll be any RO war starting here anytime soon, especially since there’s no actual interaction between ROs at this story.
Edit: @Sophia, I’m trying to get you out from this awkward situation, but you just screwed it up 
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Well, you’ll chat with them a little and there’s some room for adjusting personalities and the things they say. I’m wanting to keep the floor open to all (as long as we don’t go too overboard) over here.
Soooo, you’re good at cleaning them up or good at making them?
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You know chaos is order and order is chaos. Without one or the other neither would exist. So if you are a white night, or a Judge Dredd it doesn’t really matter. As for they both hide from the enviable end of what is called death. In the whole scheme of things chaos and order don’t matter.
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I’m good at de-chunking them, I think 
But perhaps, my “cleaning up” style will be a little “overkill” for your taste 
Just… a little…
All help and critique is welcome. If it’s reasonable, I will accept it. If it’s borderline, I’ll debate it. If it’s unreasonable, I’ll let you know.
Ninja update is up…
Now he is one deep person. 
You sure you won’t read my story? I feel like you will give me some high level feedback.
Nah iron got me taken. Also I just came up with that on the spot, and damn that is depressing for a person my age.
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If you don’t mind me asking, how old are you? You always sound like a wise old man that gives off wisdom to our childish minds.
Psst. @IronRaptor. You have a loyal member here.
I know and I really appreciate it. I appreciate everyone who has come out in support of this project. It keeps me writing because it’s no longer just “me” invested in it.
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Well… I’m just here to make this thread have 1k replies.
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And then?
You know did I mention to you that there’ll be an AI encountered named Sophia that has been worked into my brainstorming/outline sheets?
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This better not be a false spoiler! Or I’ll have your name in my story and make you a villain.
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I’m not you @Sophia. 
You’ll have to wait a while, she’s the key to finding your identity. There will be hints of her existence though.
If anyone needs me, I’m still cleaning up the file on my HDD.
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looks at you suspiciously
“A man who says what they are, are not who they seem to be.”
-King Lukas I of Lucraex
“The best way to deal with people is with a warm smile, an honest word and a blaster hidden behind your back.”
- Control
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Iron I read through the story and the so gender variable was not set correctly. It says {AI Pronoun} where the pronoun is supposed to be. There are a few typos
Ill get to when I am on my pc and share with you.
Yeah, hook me up with some screen shots if you would. My wife and I are working on the thing right now.
I think I found the label wasn’t set up correctly. Should work on the HDD, will test.
Later, I got to sleep ill probe the text in half a day or so.