Kizumomogatari is far too high a threshold for vampires, especially if the template given is Kiss-Shot Acerola-Orion Heart-Under-Blade. Supernatural entities in general are forces of nature in the Monogatari series, and vampires are the apex of the supernatural.
Now, JJBA is far more likely, at least for antagonistic vampires. Still outside normal human capability in terms of speed and strength, but the actual degree of their strength depends on the potential of the human in question.
That’s a great idea! Andtheir hypnosis/natural charisma abilities could add to the hypnosis skill
Also you remembered her full name? Even most of the charecters couldn’t do that slow clap
I’ll switch it to dramaturgy levels
Just something that stood out to me: Shinto is a Japanese religion, Akiko is a Japanese name and kitsune are from Japanese folklore, but Akiko claims to live in Chinatown. She was just introduced, so maybe you dealt with this already, but it seems kind of weird to me that she’s pretty clearly Japanese, but seems to live in a Chinese neighborhood, you know?
Played after a long time and remembered how fun it is!
Summary
Megan looks back and forth between you and the black-haired man and shruggs
shrugs
"Cameron!” Megan calls out the very focused girl, who didn’t even flinched when you came in. Seeing as it doesn’t work, she takes a deep breath and almost screams: “CAMERON!”
hadn’t
Dominic’s freckled face lightens up and shakes you’re hand a bit too vigorously, in an eager way. Note to yourself: Don’t try to pick a fight with this guy if you’re not up to it.
your
“But I think you’ll do great, if Megan is so excited about you.” He gives his sister a soft smile and she grinns, obviously proud.
grins
"That was all.” You say , , satisfied to have talked to him
take out one of those commas
"The rookie in on his first case and he already got us another one.” His voice is, naturally, edged with sarcasm.
is
Dominic nods at your choice. “We’ll split. The two of us and a member of your choice with go to Emerald City and the other two will go to the other club. Who do you want to take with us?”
will
You catch the fairie’s brown eyes, who study you with interest and seem to find potential in you, because as you get closer, his smile all but begs you to take a seat next to him.
studies
"Thanks. But…I really shouldn’t.” You say, reluctant yet not convinced. “It would be my fifth…so, six drink tonight, and… You know what, buy me one.” You resolve, firmly.
no, sixth
“Ah, I’m an expert. When I cook, I wear an chef hat and my food is 4 star restaurant worthy.” Truth be told, you suck.
a
“Then, we met Cam and she joined us, though she didn’t become and official member until she graduated high school.”
an
“You and Lucifer seems to be on friendly terms.”
seem
Actually something you look forward too. You’re sure there’s more to Grey than being a jerk.
Sorry for taking so long to reply! I’ve been busy with Christmas preparations and homework.
@anon49824592 Thanks for letting me know where it seems the game forces opinions on the MC! I’ll edit the scenes.
As for Grey, I know I shouldn’t have favorites… Some love him and some love to hate him. Does the friendship choices feel like flirting too?
The sexual orientation choice doesn’t do anything at the moment, that’s why you still get flirt options with everybody. I’ll code it soon.
@Natman1025 1: I don’t know where my vampires’ power would be on a scale. Perhaps somewhere in the middle Vampires have super speed, super strenght, they can learn magic. Their blood has healing properties and other species can use it for power, like steroids. It depends on whether a vampire wants to be more powerful. They also have weaknesses. Sun doesn’t kill them but it burns them (think someone with a pale complexion spending a day in the sun withouth sun cream). If they don’t drink blood they can starve.
2: The MC could ask Lenny for some blood for missions.
@Hannah_Minger Thanks for pointing that out. I’ve never been to America so when writing I researched on the internet, but it seems I haven’t very thorough here. I wasn’t sure whether there is a Japanese neighbourhood in New York. I thought I found a Shinto shrine in Chinatown but I searched again and it was in Brooklyn. I’ll edit it. I happened to see on your profile that you’re from US. Have you been to New York?
Not until this summer, I won’t have been. It’s about a 6-hour drive, but like, every American book, musical and movie seems to take place there, lol, and I have a few friends from there.
Ah, I understand how that is. It’s hard not to have a personal favorite. For me, though, Grey falls firmly into ‘love to hate.’
One example that stood out to me is the scene where you play darts with Grey. Option 1 is to say ‘Do you spend all your time going around being mysterious’ or something to that effect. If you choose that option, Grey will ask if you fantasize about him. Two of the three possible responses are essentially ‘yes’.
@anon49824592 I’ll add some more choices. Are there any other scenes?
@Natman1025 The MC can ask Morgan or Evelyn to teach them magic. Sorcerers and elves magic differs. They will teach the MC spells casting and dispelling, rituals, potions. Magic that six-sensers can learn. They can also learn magic that could help them resist and fight the nightmare’s magic.
@Rebelgirl I was wondering if it’s possible for you to add more “shy” options? I’m trying to make my character the shy type that is slowly opening up to the group. There are a couple I have noticed, but there are more options for the outgoing type…
@Rebelgirl I do wonder why we’re required to partner with Grey during the ‘journalism’ mission. Also, when bantering with him in your guise as a journalist, there’s a set of choices in which the only ‘rejection’ option (the remaining being ‘I want to get to know you better’) and ('I want to jump your bones) is extremely rude. Why can’t I just be cordially indifferent towards him?
(Grey, please stop giving me your Smoldering Glare; it’s creeping me out.)
I’ve been playing the Sims 3, and as I’ve been fiddling around with the character creator, I decided to try and create what I think Grey and Dominic look like.