Thank you for hunting bugs and enjoying the game! There are some typos I haven’t corrected yet but I will.
You should be able to ask all questions to Dom now. I have no idea why the choice with the music isn’t working; I have taken it out of the game but will try to add it back.
@Bloodraven Yes the game ends there, only Grey’s sleepovers as friend and boyfriend and Cam’s as girlfriend are available. I went and added “to be done” for Meg and Dom’s routes, and I’ll also add the choice to call Eva.
@Karmesinrot I’ll check and see what’s wrong with the saving slots, I’ll probably end up asking on the forum though, I’m clueless about how that works. Also thank you!
Hey I read through the WIP for the first time yesterday and I have to say I love your wip so much!!
Urban fantasy is my fav genre so this stuff is A++ for me haha
I did have some problems trying to talk to Dom at the party during my playthrough. It only let me choose one question before taking me back to the hub section and not letting me pick him again. In addition to that, I know you said you took the music portion with Megan out, but when you try to click on it as it is now, it crashes the game
Otherwise no problems!
I’m looking forward to updates^^
@hapamama93 I have no idea why that happens. Did it happen to you with other wips too or just mine?
@peaches Thank you!
I thought I had those bugd fixed, I don’t know what happened, I’ll try to fix them again!
PS I’ve only just read your wip too and love it so I’ll go gush about it on your thread.
:0 Looks like the Dom and Megan bug got fixed while I was reading, guess it’s time to reset to see their sections again… at least I’ll get to flirt with Grey again XD
Hmm, I went through it about three times and it doesn’t seem to be fixed currently, however, I do remember that I could access Megan’s scene if my MC was tipsy, if sober, Dom’s scene still cuts to the menu after one question and the error appears for Megan’s scene
Whoop, also found another one (during Dom’s scene where you talk about sports):
I think I finally found it! While rewriting I wasn’t paying attention to where my *label are placed, I think I’ll really fix it this time! @Foxboi Thank you for hunting these bugs
Edit: I reuploaded the files. @Foxboi Off topic, but I was reading your game and noticed some typos in the first chapter, wondered if anyone mentioned them or would you like me to send them to you, on your thread or pm? (Btw I love it)
Finally got through the whole WiP again and once again, it’s great as usual! Still loving the interactions between the MC and Grey (because Grey best husband of course), and especially love the new events put in the update, nice to see Lenny get some more interaction in the first chapter. Can’t wait for the next update!
Typos and Other Stuff
Something punk and edgy
This is more of a personal thing, as I do know persons is grammatically correct, but I do feel ‘people’ or ‘person’ would flow better
A comma or a period should be placed ‘between creatures’ and ‘no’

Based on the context, I think you mean ingenuous

Sudden shift to 1st person pronouns.
Either A smirk appeared or A smirk appears, considering most of the WiP is in present tense, the latter seems the best.
 bid
 ask
 alcohol

This is more of a consistency nitpick, but the previous sentence had a * ï * for naïve.
 Alliteration

Gonna be honest, this one made me chuckle, chokes
 challenge

Still fine, I drank just a little
 tilts
 challenging
 look
Not sure what’s wrong with the sentence exactly but it’s confusing
The thread would be the best place to put it so that others know which typos have been found. Thanks!
