Startup line 122: increasing indent not allowed, expected 0 was 8

I’m currently having trouble with working on my source code as: startup line 122: increasing indent not allowed, expected 0 was 8 pops up or expected 0 was 8 and now I can’t run through the first choice which I had been able to before I tried to add names.


**choice
  #Male that wants to grow up and be a boxer just like your father.
    You didn't grow up how you wanted to. You wanted to be like your father, and you wanted him to help you, but in reality it just felt like he truly did not have enough time for you. Your mother took note, and expressed concern in your dream, but she didn't truly object and let you chase what you felt you wanted in your heart. As you got older and older, she signed you up for boxing classes, where you participated in minor tournaments and what ever else kids at your age would be participating in.

    Your mother wanted you to have a fair learning experience like every one else, so when she signed you up for these classes, she didn't list you as being related to your father, because you knew, and she knew that all trainers would be fawning over a kid that was related to him. However, you're sixteen years old now. Your mother stopped paying for these classes, and said you had to get a job.

    And so you did, you worked because you still had this passion, but there was school too. School felt to you, like a minor thing, because it's not what you set out on doing. Luckily for you, you finally did get noticed. After getting noticed at the top training center for kids to train and participate in amateur tournaments, you had trainers on behalf of academies and gyms willing to truly help you out.
    *choice
      #Veteran and former fighter-turned trainer Jerry Vasquez of the endurance-based Pound for Pound Discipline Boxing Academy
        *set style1 "Endurance"
        *set style2 "Agility"
        *set trainer "Jerry"
        *set endurance +10
        *set serious +5
        *set fighting_style "Out-Boxer"
        *set gym "Pound for Pound Discipline Boxing Academy"
        Jerry was a very good fighter back in his day, but he didn't get much far from that. However though, he's most known for his fights which went the distance, usually going to decision or a knockout victory very late in the fight. If you wanna know how to last long in fights, this is the guy, and the perfect opportunity for you to start and hone your craft.

        Once you were finally given your mom's blessing to start your official training, you headed to the academy and you began to train. At the Pound for Pound Discipline Boxing Academy, you met many fighters with similar dreams and aspirations to you. Some still amateur fighters, some now in the pros. It was a tough place, and you had to be serious and respectful at all times. You couldn't act up, but you were fine with that. Everyone's here to be a boxer, not an actor. Jerry Vasquez was a former fighter, and you were sure he had enough pull to get you into some amateur fights, cause after all that is what you came here for. You want to be an actual fighter, not play with little kids anymore.

        As part of this, it was time for your first official training session. After going with the punching bag for a bit, you feel a pat on your back. You turn to see Jerry with his hand on your shoulder now. "Aye kid, you ready to start?" he asks. "Yeah, of course." You answer back. He nods, and so he takes you into the training facilities. You're amped.
        *goto Training
      #Young and charismatic trainer Tony Hunter, Jr. of the agility-based Flash n' Style Boxing Academy
        *set style1 "Agility"
        *set style2 "Endurance"
        *set trainer "Tony"
        *set agility +10
        *set serious +5
        *set fighting_style "Counter-Puncher"
        *set gym "Flash n' Style Boxing Academy"
        Tony Hunter, Jr has went and trained many young fighters similar to you, but he doesn't just teach them how to be a fast fighter and duck and avoid shots, he also teaches them how to be a marketable and interesting fighter. With Tony, you gain a sense of being able to detect punches and know how to avoid them, plus you also get a big advantage later on in your career as you'll be able to market fights and have all promoters fawning over you.

        Once you were finally given your mom's blessing to start your official training, you headed to the academy and you began to train. The Flash n' Style Boxing Academy was something different. You knew what would go on there, but you really weren't ready for what you eventually did end up experiencing. It was loud and very flashy, something that would catch your attention in seconds. Right now you had to focus on training, you could interact and play dress-up with these guys later.

        It didn't take long for you to get noticed though. "Hey!" Tony Hunter Jr makes his way over to you, and you look at him with determination in your eyes. "Good to see you here kid. You see your way around the gym? You need anything?" "Nah, I'm all good." You reply to Tony and he nods. "Well, shall we get to working then?" "Of course." You let off a smirk, excited to get starting.
        *goto Training
      #Strong and disciplined trainer Jamie Hussain of the strength-based Black Lions Boxing Academy
        *set power +10
        *set fighting_style "Slugger"
        *set gym "Black Lions Boxing Academy"
        You can say Jamie was the odd one, the third party of your choice. He was originally a bodybuilder, but he himself has a first-hand account of knowing just being strong doesn't mean you have what it takes. He'll teach you how to throw a good punch and keep you in very fit shape. He can make sure you get an easy and quick victory within the first three rounds of the fight.

        Once you were finally given your mom's blessing to start your official training, you headed to the academy and you began to train. As you entered the gym, the name suddenly made a lot of sense to you. It's dark, easy on the eyes and the spotlight is mostly on the rings and equipment, a lot of weight lifting and body building-like equipment which may come in handy when you want to bulk up. You can tell everyone there is no joke, since not a single person has a single smile on their face.

        "Ready?" A voice creeps in, nearly scaring you at first until you turn around to realize it's Jamie Hussain, your trainer. "Oh.. Yeah, I'm ready."  You say back to him. "Good, we don't have any time to waste." You nod to him. You can tell that this won't just be a serious training but also a hard physical task. And you're ready for it.
        *goto Training

*label Training


        You work hard in the gym at ${gym}, receving advice from ${trainer}. He assissts you with much of your working out, but working out doesn't get you anywhere. It's time to head in the ring and work on your new profound style of ${fighting_style}.

        At first it's a bit difficult to adjust to working on this new style, but with the help of ${trainer} you eventually do get it. Along with working primarily on your skills as a ${fighting_style}, you also do start to work on both your ${style1} and ${style2} so you stay in good enough shape and stick to what you were taught.

        After a good training session, ${trainer} pats you on the back while you're washing up in the locker rooms. "Good workout boyo." "I got some good news for you." He announces. "What are they?" You ask, confused. "Right here in my hand is a contract for your first fight." You looked at him shocked, but at the same time excited. "Really?! My first fight?" "Sure is." He replies. Just sign your name here.

What's your first name?

  *choice
        #Eric.
        *set firstname "Eric"
        *goto surname
        #Michael.
        *set firstname "Michael"
        *goto surname
        #Austin.
        *set firstname "Austin"
        *goto surname
        #John.
        *set firstname "John"
        *goto surname
        #Mike.
        *set firstname "Mike"
        *goto surname
        #Something else.
        What is your first name?
        *input_text firstname
        *goto surname

*label surname

*set real_name ((firstname & " ") & surname)

*page_break

And your last name?

*choice
        #Thomas.
        *set surname "Thomas"
        *goto_scene c1first_fight
        #Bennett.
        *set surname "Bennett"
        *goto_scene c1first_fight  
        #Santos.
        *set surname "Santos"
        *goto_scene c1first_fight
        #Diaz.
        *set surname "Diaz"
        *goto_scene c1first_fight
        #Something else.
        What is your surname?
        *input_text surname
        *goto_scene c1first_fight

*set real_name ((firstname & " ") & surname)

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After *label Training, no need to indent the block that follows. It goes right under the *label.

*label Training
You work hard in the gym at ${gym}, receving advice from ${trainer}.

After the #options in the name selection, indent the *set and *goto.

*choice
   #Eric.
     *set firstname "Eric"
     *goto surname

You’ll want to use *choice, rather than **choice, by the way.

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Thanks so much!

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