Just curious Poll. Who is your Fav RO so far?
- The sous Chef (Jules)
- The Food Critic (Eve/Evan)
- The friend (Alexis)
- The Ex (M)
- I’m here for Celine (I know she’s a fling)
- I’m here for a fling with Perry (I just love a bear)
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Yes, I saw locked choices to flirt with Celine, but I mean Celine flirting with MC and MC kind of liking it.
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Thankfully, Evan isn't hard to find, his presence magnetic even in a crowd. He's near the back of the room, standing in conversation with Céline. They make a striking pair—Evan in an elegant black suit with subtle gold accents and Céline in a red dress that's hard to ignore.
The fabric hugs her frame, and the high slit reveals just enough of her long legs to draw more than a few glances. Her blonde hair is swept over one shoulder, and she holds a glass of champagne as though it's an extension of her elegance.
I wouldn’t say that it is the same level of description for Evan and Céline. Especially considering that MC is attracted to Evan and is not interested in women.
On the way to after party:
As the car weaves through Manhattan, you can't help but notice the way Céline is crossing and uncrossing her legs—even here, in the dim, slightly grimy backseat of a taxi, she is effortlessly elegant.
She leans back, her gaze drifting to the window, but you catch her glancing at you a few times. Her lips curl into a subtle, knowing smile, as if she's reading thoughts you don't dare say aloud.
In the lift:
"I promise I won't bite," she says with a smile.
Céline presses the button for the penthouse and leans back against the mirrored wall. Her reflection glances at you, her eyes glinting with something playful—or maybe dangerous. "I hope you'll have fun tonight," she says, her voice low, almost intimate.
Not the thing you would want to think about your boss unless you are attracted to her:
And what about her? Will she have fun? What kind of fun?
Céline slips off her coat, revealing her red dress that hugs her figure in a way that makes it hard not to stare.
She turns back to you, her glass in hand, her eyes locking onto yours. There's a moment of stillness between you, the buzz of conversation and sensual music fading into the background.
She smiles, pouring you a glass before handing it to you. Her fingers brush against yours, lingering just a second longer than necessary.
Also, gay MC watching his female boss touch herself is uncomfortable
If I choose to play cards it is clear that Celine and Evan planned Celine to watch MC’s sex with Evan, which is also disturbing:
Céline sighs, shaking her head. "Are we really about to play cards while I could be watching the two of you fuck?"
Evan turns to her, expression scandalized. "You're telling me you wouldn't want to see how Chef Wren falls apart?"
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Thanks, that’s what I needed. Will push an update by Monday. All fixed. Pushed the update. Saves will be broken.
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I get an stat error when I click this:
I decline the invitation, mentioning that I need to train my staff. (+Collaborative)=(-Stress)
Stress gets higher not lower, but it should go lower.
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It’s a testing choice. If your Collaborative stats is not high enough you fail the test and your stress stats will increase.
The test failed because your MC is probably more independent than collaborative. Let me know.
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Collaborative was 55, so it looks like it was not high enough lol
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Maybe upload a save and check again. I just try it with a 55 collaborative and here’s the text I got and my stress was 50 in went down.
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I think I’ll try it again, maybe I did something wrong. I’ll let you know 
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Do we get a chance to get our lick back? The sous chef did us greasy! The scenes are spicy and all but i am ready to fight fr. Lol
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I definitely did something wrong, I’m sorry about that.
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I feel like there should be an option to have a much more disapproving and shocked reaction to Eve inviting us to an orgy. The options as is come across as way too nonchalant in my opinion (as if the only reason we’re saying no is because we’re either too busy or too tired, rather than possibly because we might object to such a thing); personally, if a new acquaintance casually invited me to an after-party orgy (alongside my new boss), my response would be more along the lines of “what the actual fuck?” lol (and would also completely kill any potential romantic interest in that person because they wouldn’t strike me as being either faithful or monogamous).
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All of this and I’d be looking for another job. Because Celine was so eager to introduce me to her friend who she knows throws orgies that she participates in as a voyeur.
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I will update the first page of the game to add a big content warning.
This is an erotica story. That means I’m going to explore themes that might not be comfortable for every reader—and that’s the point. But saying that someone who throws orgies is automatically unfaithful or incapable of monogamy? That’s a reach.
This is a story with choices, and your character has the option not to attend. I appreciate the feedback about adding a choice for MC expressing discomfort. That was constructive.
Also, have you people met me? I literally write about threesomes, poly relationships, and the BDSM stuff. Celine being a voyeur is not even the first character I’ve written. 
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It’s the context that makes it so creepy for me. It’d have me questioning everything about why I’d gotten the position at the restaurant. That said, it’s just a story path I’ll avoid from now on.
(You already know how I am about that sort of interaction, though. We had a similar conversation about the fireman in The Wedding about a year ago. It feels like something that should be a hard boundary, or should at least have the option to be played as one, just gets blown right by with a shrug.)
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I have absolutely zero issue with erotic content. I just think there can be more scope in terms of dialogue/responses that players can choose with regards to said content at times, is all.
Ok, I’ve probably worded that a bit more harshly than I intended in my head. I just meant more that someone who’s so blasé about inviting others to and participating in orgies likely isn’t the monogamous type (and sure that doesn’t automatically mean that they couldn’t be monogamous, but I don’t think it’s an entirely unreasonable assumption many people would likely make about someone like that, and thus would be put off).
And again, this is kind of what I’m getting at with the first part of this reply. If you turn E’s invite down, there’s absolutely zero acknowledgment of this part of them beyond this point, which I personally think is a bit strange (because someone who’s into that sort of thing absolutely would be a deal breaker for many people).
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Probably the only one with this opinion but am I the only one who found the orgy scene actually quite tame for a scene that includes an orgy? lol maybe because I’m playing as m!mc and Evan so Celine wasnt interested at all so it didn’t get spicy that way. I found the scene hooking up with Milo way more erotic (especially the facefucking) and that the actual sex scene with Evan was way more tame in comparison. Maybe because the characters were so separated by the glass and viewing platform the orgy just kinda felt like background noise playing on tv and the MC didnt seem that into it. Kinda disappointing that there wasnt a choice to actually go down into it, even if you didn’t participate with the other party goers. Would have also liked to of interacted with Evan more, the pacing felt a bit off with my gay mc basically sitting and having akward chit chat with his lesbian boss before he turned up again and kinda slowed the building excitement down for me.
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I couldn’t make them all exactly the same 
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Everything with E is about art, so the orgy was exactly that a “backdrop” something artistic, feeding people in a different way. I kind of like that each RO has a different level of spice. And as for participating, E will throw more parties, so there will be a chance, but I’m still unsure if I will add it.
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It does mean that you got closer to the RO (E) because of he/she invited you to an after party also celine being laidback(?)With us also must mean that she needs us in her kitchen really bad. I think…
Some of the readers might have felt the pacing on full speed but there was a brake also it ain’t over yet it’s just chapter 4. Also don’t rush the author in spilling the bare beanss.( I added a pun) 
The pacing isn’t that much rushed there might be small encounters that could encourage that we are that special to the RO. More angst scene maybe?
I mean i love what C.C. made in this story and the others.
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I haven’t been on the path to see this party yet (on my to-do list, lol), but I really enjoy E’s vibe so far. The video call between E and MC was both endearing and a little eyebrow-raising, haha. I was definitely intrigued.
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Will you add some dom/sub just like WLGYL? I’m not gonna lie… I’m into it 
In that case, which RO(s)?
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