Hey! I played this when it first came out so maybe this has changed by now (I’m waiting until the update to play again), but there’s something that stuck out to me. My female MC seemed flustered at the idea of being around girls in particular, or was not so subtlety attracted to them during the getting ready/at school scenes. Something that would make sense for an MC attracted to women or who had shown attention to Gigi, but was jarring for my straight character and I can imagine it would be for a gay male MC too if that’s a hard written part of the story.
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Yeah, this and a few other things were gender specific flavor text that I forgot to change, rest assured they’ll be fixed in the next update.
I just reread this and it is so good. I love the changing povs that you use to show different sides to events. I adore povs so I am a happy puppy
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uhh most of the ost and art are done now so I thought I’d share snippets of two of the boss themes, let me know what you guys think:
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it’s good.
Has there been an update yet I’m not asking when the author is going to update I’m asking if the game has gotten update recently
no, the update isn’t out yet, but I estimate itll be done midway through the second week of january
I’ll probably upload the first half of the chapter on patreon later
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Ur WIP really reminds me of my hero academia and Jujutsu kaisen
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Yh man ,
I know who Gojo is in the this story
This error comes up when I press the “DELINQUENT” path dialogue. Also, I see no issue with how this is written or how many choices there are. The text is well made, albeit there are very repetitive words when describing the shadows. To anyone that has thoughts about there not being enough choices or customization, be happy you can one, romance someone by your own choice, two, pick your gender, and three, have some form of personality that you can develop. I’ll be honest, I highly doubt anyone here has had their mother kill themselves and lived in a mansion alone with them their entire lives. Wanting it to end is probably what a majority of people would do in this situation no matter how you acted before.
A bit of a ramble after the error but still, very well made W.I.P. and I see no issues with anything thus far about your narration.
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What’s up hope everyone’s doing well (Yes, this is still being worked on)
I’m currently proofreading and finishing up all the paths for Chapter 2 after having to pause for quite a while due to some family issues. I was wondering if anyone here would be willing to provide feedback on the story, the sequence of events, and the overall flow of the current chapter 2
Naturally, if you have freetime and would be up for doing something like that, just send me a private message so we can talk more.
The only criteria are:
You have the ability to read
You can hold a conversation
Thats pretty much it 
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Yeah Me too, I can’t Wait to Romance Natsumi.
This man knows what’s up. Not speaking for 9 months just to drop this is exactly the type of shit I’d pull.
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I heard Yandare
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My boy , Kaiser
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When is the next update
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Soon, I promise 
I’m about halfway through the first case, but this update is pretty big, it adds like 60k words. I’ll probably have to go back and tweak some stuff later because there’s just so much in here.
There won’t be another update this big though. Everything before this was basically a beta, this is the demo in pretty much its final form. After this, I’ll just keep adding new chapters consistently if it works out
But PLEASE keep in mind, I’m juggling a lot just to keep working on it (because I don’t earn any money from this) and stay on top of everything because I really enjoy writing and making games, and stuff, so just be patient with me .
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hey man take all the time ya need 
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