I took it upon myself to actually save a couple versions of my Gabriel (from the avatar sites you posted before - again thanks for those since I’m not good at drawing lol) Its cool to see how different our Gabriel’s look, despite reading the same thing. The imagination works in mysterious ways!
Anywho my first Gabriel - Mainly a healer, pacifist, is deeply loyal to heaven and her role as an Archangel (hence the cross and doves)
Whereas my second Gabriel, she’s definitely a fighter and more in your face. She cares little for the politics of heaven and feels restricted in freedom especially when she learns about what’s in her file.
(represented by the sword and chain)
Dear Author, you have just won my eternal respect due to the sheer replayability of your story (nevermind the magnificent writing!). Thank you for the hard effort you put into both the plot and the gameplay.
This WIP is a true gem.
P.S.: Are you by chance a published author? Your prose is crazy good!
A little bit of deja vu?? is it because you read it before and don’t remember because how could someone forget an amazing game like this, its like no other, Syd is very creative and has made her own world and characters, and everything so if it reminds you of something im sure that it was just this one and your little brain just forgot
He’s not going to like the former, but he’ll permit the latter.
If the bit in spoilers was in reference to who told Gabriel to protect the kid, then no, it was not Lucifer. It was an order from God.
Thanks for the comment!
I love seeing how people interpret their Gabs, including with avatar creators! Thanks for sharing!
@squarelyblue I love you but I love the tinfoil hats more. Hopefully once all is revealed it will live up to expectations.
Also, I wouldn’t possibly be tossing out red herrings now would I?
Thank you for sharing both of your Gabriels! If you ever want to share more about them (particularly if they have a different canon name) I would love to hear about them!
Ah thank you for that lovely comment! I am not a published author, though I do have a game published as a lead designer (I did not do the writing, however.)
What a peculiar comment! I presume you’ve finished what is available of the demo so far, and I would hope you enjoyed it but perhaps it’s not your cup of tea. Indeed I like embracing some classic tropes–such as ‘the chosen one’–though I am afraid I would have no idea why the plot would seem familiar to you unless, as @Djone1 pointed out, you have perhaps played this game before. It has been kicking around for nearly 3 years now and has quite a lot of information available on the tumblr or in the discord.
If you have a concrete critique I would love to hear it! If you have any non-rhetorical questions you may direct them at me here or, as mentioned previously, the game’s tumblr or discord. I am curious what about the plot strikes you as so familiar. Perhaps it is the general trope of being a detective? There are several games with that, yes, though I take quite a few liberties and the police of Jericho City are quite unlike the force anywhere else. Perhaps it’s my use of well-known religious names, which I have utilized to create my own distinct characters and in some cases subvert expectations of the readers. I can’t answer this question for you! That lies on you.
Oh, and expect questions that may reveal spoilers, such as certain plot related questions, to be unanswered or purposefully misdirected. Cheers and welcome to the thread!
Ah… i may have mixed up the plot of the 2007 movie gabriel with the plot of the movie legion lol my bad.
And this is definitely my cup of tea! I can’t wait for it!
the only thing that bothered me was how mortal genders is known to angels? Like non-binary and such. It kinda breaks the immersion (to me anyway) how immortal beings use terms that came in to use just recently by humans. Maybe have the options changed to something that references how mortals use these sorts of terms?
I’m not sure what you mean by this? Angels aren’t subject to linear time progression so the term wouldn’t be new to them and they do have a sort of hive-mind of general knowledge when it comes to humanity. They aren’t always up to date on pop culture unless they make a point of it, but generally they have a good grasp of where humanity is at. Not to mention that non-binary literally means not of two (binary meaning of/related to two) so the word itself isn’t something I feel an angel wouldn’t use.
Angels aren’t native English speakers and speak Enochian around their own kind; anything they say is essentially translated already for players and therefore using recognizable terms seems, to me, a detail that doesn’t need justification. Not to mention angels frequently engage with a variety of other species, some of which lean towards a majority of their population using binary genders so the concept of male, female, or non-binary is something they have been exposed to in addition to a plethora of other genders. Angels, especially younger ones, tend to identify as agender; gender isn’t a big deal to angels generally. ((Is there perhaps some significance to Lucifer being the one to prompt a selection? They say there’s no such thing as coincidence…))
If you have a specific example as to what you mean in mind that would greatly help! I’m afraid at the moment I simply don’t understand the last part of your response.
Ah, i thought they were just speaking english lol I must’ve skipped over that part. I’ll be sure to read everything! My ability to explain stuff is weak so… i can’t explain further sorry. But you did clear it up for me
I honestly feel like there’s something more insidious at work than Danny being just a grandkid of Lucy. Like we know his mom is from a magically powerful family but is there something otherworldly about that as a power source? Hence why god wants Gabby to watch over him?
I’m fairly religious, but this game is too goodnto not try out and it is very well done.
My main character is definitely a conflicted mess who longs for God and is loyal to Heaven, but is deeply loyal to his nestmates and protective of humans. He was awesome by Lucifer and felt betrayed by his Fall, but doesn’t hate him.
He is jovial, sarcastic, and will only lose his virginity to a woman he loves wholeheartedly, but he fears the creation of Nephilim. He seeks to save Ramiel and his children and will fall into depression for a century when he fails.
Ultimately, he holds on to them hope that God will come back and if he follows His will with Daniel, things can return to normal.
The plot and how this game plays sounds similar to the original mythology(in that Gabriel left heaven to avoid a war) and the Tv show, Supernatural with different characters. Are you basing the story off those two?