After an accident, you find out that you have the ability to rewind time. But what turns out to be a gift get’s you into more trouble than you think at first! Finding yourself in a future that imprisons people like you, you must decide whether you want to help out the local resistance group to take down the one behind all of this or if you want him gone for good. Or perhaps you want to take the throne for yourself? Will you help or betray your friends? Will you save them or will you let them die?
Can you survive this new, unfamiliar surroundings? Can you balance everything while finding a lover? Will you include him in your machinations or will you let them in the dark? Are you going to make allies? Or enemies? All of this is your decision.
I am a fairly new to Choice of Games though I played a few games already and it is really an interesting concept. I recently started creating my own story and finished the Prolog. It is not really long though I wanted to hear what you people would think of the idea. I am not a native English speaker, so sometimes I mess up with the writing, mostly grammar and the tenses though otherwise I think it is alright.
What I would grateful for:
Mostly I am searching for any
1, Spelling or grammatical errors, same for typos.
2, Coding and Stat errors,
3, I am always open for suggestions of improvement!
4, If there is anything that you would like to mention, just say it. I am always open for suggestions or anything else you have to say.
Though, The only thing I would ask of is that you do not criticize the Characters or the Story just yet.
With the help of AJ_, I am now able to use DropBox as well!
Here is the Prolog for you guys
Please tell me what you think so far!
Also, we now have a save system! Thanks to @CJW for the plugin!
Please tell me if the system works For me at least it does.