Chapter One is 50% complete. However, I won’t put it online until I manage to finish coding the Batlle Script.
I added Stats for you to choose in the Prologue. I have tested and so far no errors.
I uploaded it, so you can check it in the link above.
If you have already reached the cliffhanger, don’t bother going past the Prologue.
I want to know if people are okay with these Stats.
not to burst your bubble but there is a game just like this called versus that’s coming out for choice of games so far in july just thout you showed know so you aren’t ripping of someone elses idea but versus is a pretty good game I will not spoil anything for you so wait for it too come out whahaha. 
Good to know.
I’ll check it out later.
Um uhhhhhhhhhhhh I mean am I weird because I grew up thinking siblings who are both adults can share a bed but siblings ARENT MENT TO BE NAKED IN THE SAME BED BECAUSE USUALLY IF SIBLINGS ARE SHARING A BED WHILE NEKKID IT USUALY HAS INCESTUAL IMPLICATIONS. I wrote this in caps because while typing I was yelling now I look rather odd
Am I the only one who was completely unfazed by being naked in a bed next to my sister? (Even with all the incestual implications)
Then again im so dense that neutrinos can’t go through me.
Heralds are not exactly humans.
They have different traditions and the like.
I originally thought about them having a different anatomy than ours.
Also thought to remove any visual genitalia. I decided against it in the end though. And made them human-like.
One more thing. Most of the Herald race is missing.
So there is a reason she is sticking out with you.
Same here. I don’t plan on forcing the player into anything they don’t want to.
Azure looks at you the same way a big sister would. Only alien-way
Would it bother the readers if I made an option to show affection to her?
Not me.
(But I am denser than the core of a black hole)
And by affection do you mean affection?
(Still fine with it just curious)
Yes. Sexuality and the like.
I have already written many potential companions.
I am not sure if any of you would like a romance option in such a game.
I almost done with the Battle Script too.
I should post an update tomorrow evening.
I feel somewhat dizzy. So many numbers and variables to think of.
*label battle
${enemy1_race} ${enemy1_name}
*line_break
Level ${enemy1_level} Power ${enemy1_power}
*line_break
HP ${enemy1_healthpoints}
*line_break
SP ${enemy1_staminapoints}
*line_break
AS ${enemy1_aurashield}
${enemy2_race} ${enemy2_name}
*line_break
Level ${enemy2_level} Power ${enemy2_power}
*line_break
HP ${enemy2_healthpoints}
*line_break
SP ${enemy2_staminapoints}
*line_break
AS ${enemy2_aurashield}
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${player_race} ${player_name}
*line_break
Level ${player_level} Power ${player_power}
*line_break
HP ${player_healthpoints}
*line_break
SP ${player_staminapoints}
*line_break
AS ${player_aurashield}
*set physical_damage round((100 - round(((enemy1_strength * 100) / player_strength) / 100)) * round(player_strength * 1.5))
*set magical_damage round((100 - round(((enemy1_magic * 100) / player_magic) / 100)) * round(player_magic * 1.5))
*set accuracy_rate round(7500 / round((enemy1_agility * 100) / player_agility))
*set evasion_rate round(2500 / round((enemy1_agility * 100) / player_agility))
I am still not sure how to make a (hit rate)% work. For now, I have just been keeping it in integer numbers.
I do hope I can make it by evening.
My vote would be not to have any romance options with family members or characters who are treated that way. It would distract from the rest of your game; for a lot of readers, I think it would be hard to understand or appreciate a new culture if their basic taboos were so different.
If you do want to add romance, you could add another character. Being torn between your love interest and your obligations to your family would be an interesting conflict.
How many options would be acceptable for all of you?
There will be 6 contractors and 6 companions available that can join your party.
12 characters. 2 characters have already been introduced.
I don’t mind adding such a thing as romance. But I will only make it if enough people post below and tell me they want to have these options.
Romancing character’s is okay,
You’re going to have trouble keeping track of so many different stats. I tried to do a complex web of stats for my WIP, but eventually had to cut it back because it was confusing everybody. Chociescript is designed primarily for telling stories not necessarily complex fights. If the battle system is absolutely essential and you can’t figure out how to do it in CS, you might try to use a different program such as RPGMaker VX Ace.
Yes. You are right.
My original goal was to learn programming and make a standlone game.
I have some issues that stop me from doing that at the moment. I will eventually.get to that some time this year.
As for the Stats. I don’t really mind writing them. If I am given the tools, I simply use them.
I don’t think I would have to add more, since I am already finishing the Battle Script.
Which to be honest, is too simple and imperfect. I wish I was smarter.
I uploaded a Boss Battle to test the Script performance.
I lost. Completely.
I have bad luck. I didn’t expect a critical.
Anyone think the Script is a bit unfair?
Update
Modified Boss Difficulty.
Did it say I was sleeping next to my nude sister…
I am somewhat ashamed people mostly post to react to that fact.
I don’t recall people commenting on the overall plot or asking me to input romances and the like.
I feel a bit disappointed that my plot seems to be not that interesting.
I decided to cut Chapter One as it is.
Since it is getting huge enough thanks to the Script.
It is uploaded now.
Tell me what your thoughts are so far.
There is so little comment here about it, it makes me depressed.
“It is sort of dificcult to part ways for a year… Specially since I have always looked after you. There should a place for us in another realm. A world where we no longer need to enter into conflict.”
(Especially,
I hope/wish/think there is a place for us in another realm)
You can feel the glares of many people on you. They have sensed your Aura. They know you can be a treath to them as they could be to you.
(Idk what you mean by treath because its a place)