Share thoughts on an Independent gamebook writer

Hi guys.
I have a friend, who asked me to help him out by popularizing a bit his works. I tried the game and think it’s quite fun. But I haven’t read too many gamebooks anyways. We appreciate any feedback. Thanks!
“House Of Horror” by Gaetano Abbondanza

Recategorized to “Other IF”.

This bears more than a passing resemblance to House of Hell…

The website has a section devoted to FF stories by amateur writers. This story would be right up their street.

If you read my friend’s book you will see he talks about Jackson. It’s fan fiction after all. Don’t take it too seriously.

Gaetano is one of the most prominent Tin Man Games authors. He is a follower of the British school of gamebooks (Fighting Fantasy), so he likes dice rolls.

Yeah, guys, what do you think?