oh dang, I’d been logged out for a few days, so I missed the new replies. Hello hello and thank you for enjoying it!
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I’d never heard of that game before, but it sounds interesting. I can’t answer the questions in case of spoilers though (:
I’m discovering a lot of fun stuff thanks to people commenting about things that this game reminded them of.
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I had a dream about this game the other night…it was very creepy and sexy ;p My subconscious salutes you! 
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I’m honored xD
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aa thank you for the detailed review!! I feed on data and well, compliments. 
You will indeed see some of that in the later parts, or perhaps the epilogues of the story! There are a few more sidecharacters, and their pov will be shown as well.
Also I’m so happy that you felt the aesthetics. I’m a big fan of aesthetics and sensuality, and I always hope it can be sensed through my writing as well.
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Yesss I love that song and the channel! Minor key versiion of What’s up is my favourite!
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With my dream in chapter 2 why did I think that I was a psycho because of that childhood trauma… kinda afraid when I took the knife in my dream and turned out I was gonna stab my spouse cause actually it’s half a dream and half sleepwalking
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God this is so good. I feel like amnesia is overused in movies and books so it was exciting to read something that actually felt real. Where others use amnesia as a way to avoid giving background, I think the amnesia here is more of a mystery that I want to figure out.
Mc’s spouse is written so well! They’re charming with just a hint of aloofness. The conversations between mc and their spouse are so organic. There’s an air of danger with them (the anecdote Mc’s spouse gave at the end of chapter two seriously gave me the chills), and I look forward to reading more!
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aaa thank you. I’ve actually put off uploading chapter 3 to revise chapter 1 and 2 because I felt I fucked up a bit regarding the amnesia (I’ve also forgotten that Finnish summers don’t have nights). There’s a Lot to fix, but I’ll try to update the new chapter soon after a preliminary patching.
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Depends on the time of the Summer and part of Finland though - the longest time of no darkness is in the Northest Finland, in Southern Finland it’s only in June. After that, nights are shorter than in Winter, but they do exist.
You’ll be fine.
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No, I checked the location and date and it’s unfortunately smack in the middle of ‘white night’ season xD (I have a Finnish beta helping me out)
It’s fine, it’ll be fun writing about it.
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Good luck!
So you have a specific time and location in mind, I take it? 
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Yup! Well, things might change if it doesn’t fit, but for now I do!
(I’m the type to walk around in google street views and look up real estate info before deciding the scene hdnds)
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Well, at least it means that A didn’t lie on this particular topic, and they with MC are indeed in Finland, not just in the middle of nowhere 
-1 to questions to be paranoing about.
Or, you know, Limbo-Finland…
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WOW! You have SERIOUS dedication to this! But: a question: is an update in the works? If so, how big?
I upload one chapter per update! (The chapter three uploaded in the current demo was a mistake)
I was aiming to upload it before March but that went out the window when I decided to rework some stuff on the previous chapters ; - ;
I’ll try my darnest to upload within two weeks.
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This seems interesting so far, and I can’t wait to see where the story goes from here. The story so far has done a really good job at capturing my own experience with gender dysphoria as a trans-woman, which was a welcome sight. Sometimes people fail to capture just how awful the dysphoria is, so I was actually taken aback a bit by it if I’m being honest x3
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Thank you! Despite my many promises the progress is painfully slow ; - ;
I hope the dysphoria didn’t trigger you. I did put warnings on the post. I’m trans (ftm) myself, so I have a better insight when it comes to dysphoria than my cisgendered peers. I’m glad you found it refreshing!
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Don’t worry, it didn’t trigger me <3 I’ve personally come to terms with how I feel, and that combined with hormones have certainly improved my mental state, enough to the point where I hardly deal much with dysphoria anymore. It was just really refreshing to finally get someone who actually managed to put into words, how hard it can be to deal with when it’s at it’s worst, that’s all :3
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actually, on that topic—are there plans to add nonbinary gender options? the dysphoria for binary trans ppl is done so well but I had to play as an oc to see it, I’ll admit I was kind of disappointed to see such a well written take on it but only available for binary people so I couldn’t actually play as myself if I wanted to. obvi your story and your decision, but I’m curious if I have something to look forward to? well, as much as someone can look forward to reading gender angst lol
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