Lol. I had to! I felt like that for sure had to be a problem at some point, right?
Thank you so much for that. I spent a little more time on these scenes so it would feel more natural. Also, about the other suggestions, I’m totally for that. I had re-wrote chapter 3 and was just tired of having it on hand. I had to get it out, you know? Although, I did not fine tune. It still needs quite a bit of work. I will lengthen some scenes and be adding more dialogue. Over all, a great help as always!
Oh, most definitely not simple at all! I’m glad you enjoy Gabrielle. She needs some love! Thank you for your interest.