She’s partially based off Raidou Kuzunoah and some anime character I can’t really remember, and a conversation I had with an online friend before about what I’ll do when I’m doing proper private detective cases.
But then. She could also be meant as symbolism(Maybe?)
It’s a (possibly)clear representation of the lower class not having a voice, and rebelling against consumer culture all the while clashing with the awareness of society but unable to escape it from it. Or something.
That. And the fact that I just really like moody girls.
Rewriting is just a simple part of writing cycle. Or, should I say, editing is a simple part of…
I believe that editing for improvements is something that people will like, rather than hate. However, keep in mind of what kind of writing style you have. One thing that makes your story unique is your writing style, and as a lot of us said here, we’re liking your style.
Yo now that I think about it I totally see it but yeah I’m kinda excited for more cause TBH I feel this has very high potential (at least in my opinion)
Really cool concept and fun demo, i really like the concept of Airhead vs Stern in the intro, both being the bad ass and being the airhead was really fun (even if the ‘glare’ option was the least cool of them)
also the anime vibe is really well done, we even have the old drunken master like in Kung Fu movie (or more recently Yakuza 0)
i think it’s the first game i played that really give you the feeling of playing an idiot Hero in a good way and that’s while keeping the stern option cool (the whole ‘then i’m the emperor’ and ‘didn’t i tell you to kneel’ are probably my favorite lines)
personally my favorite is hobo guy
Also found a glitch where if you choose okubiro public, I put what as my name but that probably dose not matter, no, then metal fangs makes it go back to the name selection part
The weakling’s face is beaten too black and blue to see whatever tone of skin he used too have
to
The band of trash laughs hard clearing trying to scare Noel who just stares calmly at them back.
clearly
Am I the only one thinking North Point is actually really cool?" The sound of a girl voice on the sideline of the opposing school does grab the attention of other ones from their school.
girl’s
The would never turn a student away under the prospect of the fact they would still get paid tuition fees anyway
They
The is a little tempting. But I do have to keep my promises here. Really, I don’t have anything against any of you.
