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It’s looking good! And the character sheet is nice and detailed. Would agree with Dragon that it could just use a little filling out. Normally I’m always going on about how there’s too much waffle but think of the juicy, succulent story… sorry, hungry. Also couple of typos.

Wether should be whether

“run on scentence”

“put it on facebookthat” I love how you get dropped in it via facebook = D

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@Flux Thanks for helping out with typos, that’s really helpful. To answer your question about Harris, that choice actually has three outcomes, and in order to not make him angry you have to pass a skill check as well as a leadership check. Currently the only way to get a leadership point is to choose “Jocks”

I learned a lot about the stats while writing yesterday, and I think I may need to make some outcomes a little bit easier, or maybe be a little more transparent about what options will do on the front end. We’ll see how people do.

@dreamdragonhatchling I will try add more descriptions to that part. I may end up using pictures, but I have no idea how to add them at this point lol
Also, sorry you got hit with that bug. Should have been
*goto END4
I feel bad so I will tell you that that was the very last choice of the game and it is not the one that works if you catch my drift. :wink:
What sucks is that I don’t think I can fix it because I am unable to edit my original post and @FairyGodfeather is the only reason the link is even at the top. I will certainly fix it in the future.

@FairyGodfeather Thank you for fixing that. I really appreciate it.

@Zanite Thanks for helping me find those. I am definitely not 100% satisfied with the writing, but I wrote much of it late last night in order to meet the deadline I set. I ended up with a job interview and a bunch of other stuff this week that cut into my time and didn’t let me edit or flesh out the project as much as I would have wanted to. I will be rereading my work and polishing for sure. I will probably add details in the bare places then. Glad you like it. I was hoping the stat sheet would not be too dense for people’s tastes. Many of them don’t get used yet, but how much of a reputation with professional musicians can a sophomore in high school get, you know?

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GENERAL DISCLAIMER: I LEFT A BAD *GOTO IN THE VERY END OF THE DEMO.

Please do not as Alex to “go out”
It crashes the game, and I cannot fix it due to my inability to edit old posts without mod help

ALSO IT DOES NOT WORK. THE RESULT IS YOU GETTING REJECTED 100% OF THE TIME.

So try something else

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Bonus points to anyone who finds the Star Wars or South Park references.

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So I think I found a typo

"So I was thinking maybe we should play, like, an AC/DC cover or something, says Harris"

If I’m reading this right it should be a " where the comma is

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@DragonWarrior You are correct. Thanks for pointing that out. I hope you liked the game. Be sure to let me know of anything else that you notice. Thanks :smile:

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Yeah the game seems great so far, and that’s the only thing I noticed that wasn’t already mentioned :smile:

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Awesome. Glad you are liking it. Thanks

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I got the “your creativity improved” thingy from having a dead sister, but it didn’t change my stats in any way? At least from what I was able to tell.

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I will look at this, but it should have given taken you from “No original ideas” to “No GOOD original ideas”. I will look at this, thanks.

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Just wanted to say that Your game is awesome. Also, when I picked that my sister died it DID change the creativity to “No GOOD ideas” for me.

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Awesome glad to hear that you like it so far. Thanks for helping me bug hunt. :smile:

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Just wondering, who’s Stacey? After agreeing to join the band, it says that Stacey and Harris are thrilled but who is she??

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Keep up the good work, will be keeping an eye on this game it’s really fun so far :smile:

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Crap, I missed a name change. It’s Megan. Thanks for pointing it out.

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Thank you so much. Glad you like it.

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For those who may have played the demo and become curious.

You can win the talent show
You can romance Alex (within the demo, he/she does not always reject you)

Both of these endings are hard to find. If you haven’t tried being a jerk and doing a solo performance I would recommend it. I intend to place as much emphasis on the “mercenary” style of play as I do on the “band leader” side.

Also, I am extremely interested in hearing feedback about what you guys think of the whole “subconscious spirit guide” thing. I think it’s fun writing their lines using only lyrics, but if it isn’t working for the majority of people I am open to changing how they work or minimizing their role in the story. I am also open to having them show up more often. Let me know what you think. Thanks

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I still haven’t discovered how not to piss Harris off :cold_sweat:

But I think that the spirit guide thing is quite nice because it kinda feels like a “reflection” moment.

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Cool glad you like the subconscious thing.

You have to make perfect choices to get the outcome that makes him happy. You need +2 skill and +1 leadership. I actually will expand that choice body, but I ran out of time and that was the last part I did so for now if you have <2 skill you pretty much don’t help him and if you don’t have the leadership but do have the skill it helps him but still irritates him. That choice needs a little work, but I wanted to meet the deadline I had set for the demo.

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Im sooo loving this @gkex keep up the great work <3 ^^