RISE: The Life of a Vigilante WORK IN PROGRESS

I think the costume needs to be described. I didn’t know if the character was wearing a mask or not, I was confused. I pretty much imagined the MC looking like the Punisher from the movie just without a skull on his shirt and with a bulletproof vest. Tell me if I’m right or not please.
A description of the costume would help A LOT and I think the pace needs to be a little slower in the beginning. Lets us get to know the family and lets us get to know Hayden. Instead of starting the game with you on a building, start its itch you as a kid on the day your parents die.
I think also allowing us choose our name would be nice also and possibly choosing what types of martial arts we study?
Also I think that we should also get to know the Monk, that part was too quick. I understand this is the first draft.