Just finished coding chapter one, going to put link here once i finish publishing
so exited i love zombies 8-X
Name could be Elaine
Each chapter is VERY short just want to explain that i will probably have all other chapters after first be longer though, im very busy with other things so i dont have much time to code, thats why it will take atleast a week or 2 per chapter
Hopefully able to get game out this weekend
one moment
Game is up, only first chapter though
I read your demo, its ok, but its a rush and blunt speedy style of writing, for me its really dificult to follow your line and there arent a really descripcion and choices about my avatar its a game after all, but i really like the first page and with more descripcion and little less blunt , have a good future. Remember many people like me are no first hand english, care the vocabulary.
Pretty good so far. I don’t remember any spelling errors, but there was one time when my character was waking up, it said “I love my .” So I get the feeling something is missing there. 
*spoiler*
Out of curiosity, do you intend to keep it so that only the one path has you “survive”, as in get to continue playing a game? I played through twice and got turned into a zombie if I stayed but just ripped apart if I went to the bathroom. Is this on a random function or is it set? It just seems really early on in the game to have a ‘do one thing you live, other thing you die’. Either way, I should not have had six enchiladas, jeez. 
Oh and when you get to editing and such, I would suggest breaking up some of the walls of text near the end. I think it would provide much better pacing, particularly the scene where the patient is undergoing the injection…one line I’m cramping up and the next a little girl is getting her face torn off. I feel like it needs some sort of break in there somewhere.
*end spoilers*
K i will still edit this and release the edit with next chapter though so i will fix things like that and ill probably add descriptions and things.
Yes it was supposed to say {wife_hus} but i might have accidentally put (wife_hus) which probably was the case and would cause a blank area
*Spoiler* yes it is supposed to be like that and this is setting up the next chapters where the main story is.
I restart demo love the gore scene, you got talent for this scenes
yeah i agree with @marajade its a awsome game but is too rushed its like you din’t spent enough time on it, you need to describe it more clearly otherwise its a good game i hope you use my advice for the next chapter
Nice game so far looking forward to see where it goes
Wow. Most “crappy” way to die. Can’t wait for the rest of the game to “come out”. :-))
Bad puns aside, I liked the game.
wait are you talkin shit about him or sayin he is good i accually think it was a good game
He is making a retrence to the ending where you decide to take a shit or not, i thought it was a funny comment xD
lol well that was tottaly wierd i pmed you, check it out