Hi one suggestion that I have is if you could have a note at the end of a decision that effect stats, because I have no idea where most of my stat changes came from ( especially the ones where all my relationships do my family members decreased to neutral even though I interacted with my brother. And I have no idea where my four percent in domiance came from, not that I mind but if the first increase in dominance would come from the choice of me having shoulder length hair, then I would suggest maybe changing that or omitting stat changes from hair styles because of the unfortunate implications. But could it be that my decrease in my family relationship could have somthing to do with my choice of responding sarcastically even though I had more percent in my Sweet stat?)
I thought it was pretty obvious that they were in their twenties, because at first I thought that the bottle that our friend gives us was alcohol .
But mid twenties is also my default age for such a setting.
Umm, hey there! If I showed where all the stat changes happened, there would be a LOT of excess dialogue! I do not want to map out how the stats work so people can be how they want and not worry about stats as this is not a stat based game.
-Closeness will happen if you’re a jerk to one family member or if you do not visit one of the brothers on your off day.
Dominance likely came from an earlier choice, dear. Customisable appearance options do NOT have stat links. Dominance usually comes from you taking charge in a conversation or a more aggressive reaction!
Sweet stat does not have anything to do with that! If you were harsh to your father or didn’t visit a brother, closeness will be effected!
I already adore this story and it’s characters, this is beautifully written! Like Nadin, I was a bit confused by where some stats and relationships changed sometimes. If there isn’t a major focus on statbuilding, though, then I’m not too bothered.
Will each book have a separate love interest or will they just be introduced to the already existing characters?
Another question though, @gatheringstardust if the MC have a relationship in Book One and decided not push through a relationship in the future books, will be have more development time for MC and the initial RO you have chosen?
Will we missed out if we don’t romance anyone else throughout the book until the very end so that my MC could stay loyal to a certain RO?
Okay so… basically. your character will not remember romancing anyone, except in small flashbacks that will not make sense to them. All will be revealed in book six, in which there will be decisions on… how to handle what has happened (romancing each love interest). If you do not push through with a romance, you will not get more building on your previous romance.
If you do not romance anyone else except a specific RO… I don’t really know how that would work. I’m not sure if I’ll have a friendship route or not yet, but if there is one, you will likely miss certain content as these ROs may not reveal some details to someone that’s only a friend! It’s not like you’re being unloyal, I promise. Your mc doesn’t remember being with the RO and more information on that will be shown in later books!
I just finished my playthrough and I really enjoyed it! Avalon is a delight and the world is very interesting! I really like all of the characters and I’m really looking forward to where the story is going!
I did find a few more typos and some wrong pronouns