# Revel- A W.I.P

**URL:** <https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/revel-a-w-i-p/521>\
**Category:** Works In Progress\
**Created:** [June 4, 2012, 12:25pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/revel-a-w-i-p/521 "2012-06-04T12:25:49Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 20\
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**Author:** ![SengokuKronos](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/sengokukronos/32/420_2.png) [@SengokuKronos](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/SengokuKronos)\
**Post date:** [June 4, 2012, 12:25pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/revel-a-w-i-p/521/1 "2012-06-04T12:25:49Z")

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I have come up with an idea for a game and I have the first scene done on paper. I thought it would be good to announce it now so I would be able to post updates and such.  
The story takes place in the Kingdom of Duress a prosperous nation that, despite its cheery look is a very dark nation at heart. You are the servant of the royal family, but you will soon find out a truth about them that will change your outlook about not only the empire, but the whole world.  
I need help with this project because not only am I new to coding but I need two more stats, and I get unmotivated very easily. Please for the sake of this project, support me!

Usagi !\_!

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**Author:** ![Lordirish](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/lordirish/32/238051_2.png) [@Lordirish](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Lordirish)\
**Post date:** [June 4, 2012, 12:40pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/revel-a-w-i-p/521/2 "2012-06-04T12:40:04Z")

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I would help but have four projects started and seven more waiting. I write to slow for so so many plot bunnies running around in my head lol. Good writing to you and hope to see something soon.

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**Author:** ![SengokuKronos](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/sengokukronos/32/420_2.png) [@SengokuKronos](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/SengokuKronos)\
**Post date:** [June 4, 2012, 12:51pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/revel-a-w-i-p/521/3 "2012-06-04T12:51:41Z")

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LOL I should probably call them back now.

Usagi !\_!

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**Author:** ![Shoelip](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/df788c/32.png) [@Shoelip](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Shoelip)\
**Post date:** [June 4, 2012, 1:38pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/revel-a-w-i-p/521/4 "2012-06-04T13:38:03Z")

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As long as the pages in the game don’t end with “Usagi !\_!” I’m interested.

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**Author:** ![Lordirish](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/lordirish/32/238051_2.png) [@Lordirish](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Lordirish)\
**Post date:** [June 4, 2012, 1:53pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/revel-a-w-i-p/521/5 "2012-06-04T13:53:48Z")

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No I rather like the company and its nice and fuzzy up there in my brain.🙂

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**Author:** ![SengokuKronos](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/sengokukronos/32/420_2.png) [@SengokuKronos](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/SengokuKronos)\
**Post date:** [June 4, 2012, 4:18pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/revel-a-w-i-p/521/6 "2012-06-04T16:18:03Z")

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@Shoelip don’t worry only one page will and you will barely even notice it.

Double Usagi !\_!

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**Author:** ![SengokuKronos](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/sengokukronos/32/420_2.png) [@SengokuKronos](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/SengokuKronos)\
**Post date:** [June 4, 2012, 4:24pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/revel-a-w-i-p/521/7 "2012-06-04T16:24:35Z")

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For the sake of knowledge here are my current stats

Strength  
Honor  
Intelligence  
And Stealth.

I want two more stats that will define my character and make the system easier.

Wan ?\_?

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**Author:** ![RockBou](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/r/ecc23a/32.png) [@RockBou](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/RockBou)\
**Post date:** [June 4, 2012, 4:31pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/revel-a-w-i-p/521/8 "2012-06-04T16:31:26Z")

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Charisma?

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**Author:** ![SengokuKronos](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/sengokukronos/32/420_2.png) [@SengokuKronos](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/SengokuKronos)\
**Post date:** [June 4, 2012, 7:49pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/revel-a-w-i-p/521/9 "2012-06-04T19:49:19Z")

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Coding practice:

You see a light before you  
----- \*Choice  
-------- #Run towards it!  
----------- You see the light of purification which gives you eternal peace.  
----------- \*finish  
-------- #Light is scary, run away!!!  
----------- The darkness swallows you with abandon. You are never seen again.  
----------- \*finish

As I said, practice. This has no bearing on the game.

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**Author:** ![SengokuKronos](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/sengokukronos/32/420_2.png) [@SengokuKronos](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/SengokuKronos)\
**Post date:** [June 5, 2012, 6:54am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/revel-a-w-i-p/521/10 "2012-06-05T06:54:17Z")

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Someone please check if this is right, as I am not able to test it at this time.

Usagi !\_!

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**Author:** ![CS\_Closet](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/cs_closet/32/684_2.png) [@CS\_Closet](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/CS_Closet)\
**Post date:** [June 5, 2012, 2:18pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/revel-a-w-i-p/521/11 "2012-06-05T14:18:50Z")

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Close, but that’s not quite right.

Remember to keep an eye on your indentation. ChoiceScript isn’t picky about how much you indent as long as you keep it consistent.

A corrected version with explanation:  
`You see a light before you *Choice (<- choices should be even with what was written before them) --#Run towards it! (<- the fewer indention, the easier to keep track of. I'm using 2) ----You see the light of purification which gives you eternal peace. (<-2 more indents) ----*finish (<- the same number as above) --#Light is scary, run away!!! (<- 2 indention to keep it even with the previous choice) ----The darkness swallows you with abandon. You are never seen again. (<-2 more) ----*finish (<- same as above)`  
I’m sorry if that was confusing, but I hope it helps.

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**Author:** ![SengokuKronos](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/sengokukronos/32/420_2.png) [@SengokuKronos](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/SengokuKronos)\
**Post date:** [June 5, 2012, 4:26pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/revel-a-w-i-p/521/12 "2012-06-05T16:26:53Z")

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Nope that was really helpful 😃  
Now to find a format

Usagi !\_!

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**Author:** ![Bastiaan](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/b/c57346/32.png) [@Bastiaan](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Bastiaan)\
**Post date:** [June 6, 2012, 4:42am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/revel-a-w-i-p/521/13 "2012-06-06T04:42:16Z")

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Use notepad++

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**Author:** ![SengokuKronos](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/sengokukronos/32/420_2.png) [@SengokuKronos](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/SengokuKronos)\
**Post date:** [June 7, 2012, 7:09pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/revel-a-w-i-p/521/14 "2012-06-07T19:09:44Z")

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Bumping this up again because I still need two more stats for the game before I start.

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**Author:** ![Zach](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/z/51bf81/32.png) [@Zach](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Zach)\
**Post date:** [June 8, 2012, 5:12pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/revel-a-w-i-p/521/15 "2012-06-08T17:12:22Z")

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mercil and crulty

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**Author:** ![SengokuKronos](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/sengokukronos/32/420_2.png) [@SengokuKronos](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/SengokuKronos)\
**Post date:** [June 8, 2012, 5:55pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/revel-a-w-i-p/521/16 "2012-06-08T17:55:37Z")

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Good but no. Look at the ones above for reference.

Usagi !\_!

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**Author:** ![Zach](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/z/51bf81/32.png) [@Zach](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Zach)\
**Post date:** [June 8, 2012, 5:58pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/revel-a-w-i-p/521/17 "2012-06-08T17:58:47Z")

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I thought it would be good i cannt see a anything else so i had to guess

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**Author:** ![Lordirish](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/lordirish/32/238051_2.png) [@Lordirish](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Lordirish)\
**Post date:** [June 8, 2012, 6:01pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/revel-a-w-i-p/521/18 "2012-06-08T18:01:40Z")

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Aceint knowedge possible magical in nature or old tech  
Lore of local land to help you survive if you have to flee

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**Author:** ![CS\_Closet](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/cs_closet/32/684_2.png) [@CS\_Closet](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/CS_Closet)\
**Post date:** [June 8, 2012, 6:42pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/revel-a-w-i-p/521/19 "2012-06-08T18:42:29Z")

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You can find a pretty good list of commonly used stats [here](http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Attribute_(role-playing_games)).

Which ones you should use is largely dependent on what direction you want to take your game.

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**Author:** ![Cagye\_bee](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/c/ebca7d/32.png) [@Cagye\_bee](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Cagye_bee)\
**Post date:** [June 10, 2012, 10:35am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/revel-a-w-i-p/521/20 "2012-06-10T10:35:49Z")

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Why do you need more stats just roll with the ones you have if the new stats don’t fit with your story you probobly don’t need them

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