Thank you, will look into it as soon as I am able.
Also, there are cameras hidden in the hallways that activate when something connects with the wall. The AI is programmed to understand sign language so it easily decyphers the MC’s hand movements.
EDIT: The scene mixup has been fixed and should work without issue.
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Thanks bro much appreciated. 
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Avi
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hiii not sure if text is supposed to be thereeee
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@AMER1CANN1NJA09 and @Avi thank you. Will look into those as soon as I am able.
EDIT: Both issues have been fixed.
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Finally a choice that I truly get behind,
Me: omg that’s so dumb…
Me: sudden primal urge to lick soap intensifies 
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Yalung
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Xiang and Akashi’s name just kinda appears out of nowhere when they rescue us. I do think that the challenges in the first chapter could use some more polishing but the challenges in the second chapter’s is definitely a nice improvement and the option to lick whatever that round thing in the bathroom was a great option
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I will go back into fixing chapter 1 once I’m at least halfway through with chapter 2.
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the coding typo is still there (on my playthrough at least)
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I am so sorry about that! It should be fixed now on all routes.
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I’m really enjoying this! It’s a really interesting concept and the characters are really good
Also I just realized i made my male mc like 5’2 compared to the like 5’6 and up male ro’s and I couldn’t stop laughing
Speaking of ro’s tho X got me feeling some way 
choosing the option to go back to my cell was also funny to me because all I could think of was X just >:C and picking my mc up like a cat asgkjsd
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I really like the idea that the mc has an handicap and I really am curious to read how the story will go out.
So far, I love it. Your characters are pretty good and feels alive and I like how the mc evolve and grow in this world. Can’t wait to read more.
Are you going to make a serie or will you make a one shot?
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Thank you for the kind words!
I actually have planned 3 books for this.
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I liked this very much! I can’t wait to get to know the characters better! I didn’t really get what the thing on their head was supposed to do tho, is it just me or was the ambiguity intentional? it didn’t really seem to block their powers or anythig cause they could still feel people’s auras… will we find out later on? Cause as of now I can’t wait to know more about this whole thing, it’s very interesting and well written!
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Thank you for the kind words!
The helmet was actually used for precautionary measures. There’s a belief that people with mental powers can also mind control others. That’s why the MC was equipped with the helmet and to keep guards from making direct eye contact. (PS. The MC doesn’t have any mind control abilities but the prison isn’t taking any chances.)
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Oh ok! thank you so much for clarifying! : D
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It’s a good start so far, has a lot of potential. Keep up the good work. 
Also. Why do you get such an exciting project? I didn’t get anything this exciting when I was in school. Sad face. I like the game so far.
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Has a camera, with a dictionary of signs, so that it reacts to motion. Something like that.
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Konoi
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Not a lot to say since the new content is very short, aside from the fact I still like this WIP a lot.
That being said… During the scene in the bathroom, at the beginning of chapter 2, the water is referred to as “substance” twice. It sounds a little strange - maybe “liquid” would be better.
Also, I have a question. My MC is a kitsune, and well, we know their amount of tails vary with age, and he has at least two since at some point he looked at “his tails”, plural. But I was wondering… how longs kitsunes live, and when do the tails grow?
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Gosh, could imagine the growing pains from another one beginning to sprout mid-mission? Fortunately, the MC doesn’t seem old enough for that to randomly happen within the scope of the story. 
Still, the most common myths say a kitsune gains their second tail after living for 100 years. I’m not sure the MC is that old, but there’s also no reason it can’t be different here.
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