Not sure if an error or I just read it wrong, but when search for a fire arm, I got one removed from my pants.
Picked an earlier choice of NOT bringing it, then went to the Sinners place, if that helps.
Did I have two on my person? If not, would there be an option to not have any weapon at all?
Other than that, the writing style (both descriptions and dialog) is pretty nice and quite fluid. Didn’t read anything stiff or that felt forced in.
The story overall seems more adult and mature, which is always a good surprise.
The main characters so far seem pretty fleshed out and not bland archetypal caricatures, which is a huge thing for me, so quite please with that too.
Not sure I have much to complains about for now, even if only typo wise, only spotted one;
‘‘Dante holds your gaze with his own mismatched ONE’’ should be ONES I believe.
Also, a suggestion, for the sunglasses and attire choices, it would be nice to know what is chosen since I had to go back with a save since the clothing didn’t fit much what I had in mind with the colour/style mentioned in the choice.
More styles/colour palettes would also be nice, but if it doesn’t have any impact on other character’s perception, I don’t think it’d very necessary at all.
Also seems heavily cyberpunk 2077 inspired, but I could be wrong. Got that vibe or somthin’.