I’ve been working away for a few weeks on my game “Relics of the Lost Age”, and I’ve got the first chapter (of a projected six) out and up as a demo! The demo is roughly 50,000 words.
The game is basically a fun (I hope), swashbuckling Indiana Jones-em-up, in which you play as a 1930s archaeologist trying to locate a number of occult artifacts before various nasty types can get their hands on them. There will be high adventure in far-flung corners of the world, wacky stunts, Nazi-punching, the possibility of romance (4 possible ROs in total, although you don’t meet them all in Chapter 1), loss, betrayal and all kinds of good stuff along those lines. Give it a go; you never know, you might like it!
I’m looking for feedback of any and every kind, from the lowliest typo to the most cavernous plot-hole. Thank you for your time!
Content Warning: It’s not the most potty-mouthed game, but there are a few instances of strong swearing. Some relatively graphic violence. One character makes a racially-inappropriate comment, but in the game’s defence that character is a literal, actual Nazi, and the MC certainly doesn’t endorse what he says! The MC is ethnicity-locked, for important story-reasons that will become clear in later chapters.
The game can be found here: https://dashingdon.com/go/5009