In my head I pictured the guide looking more like Hela from the Norse pantheon.
character update above
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There was an error when you you try to proceed when Jin and Selene leave together and some pronoun errors when MC is a child. Other than that really good and can’t wait for more.
Yes…there is a new version of the WIP. Same world, same lore, same characters, same antagonists but written very differently.
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Well written, hope you can continue
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Btw… Probably good time to change the topic title since the game have new title.
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I knew that you mentioned a rewrite, but I wasn’t expect, and I like it. I saw some minor mispellings, but nothing game breaking or major.
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Wait a REWRITE does that means I become the Jade emperor God the most overwhelming being even defeating GOD THE CREATOR OF EVERYTHING 
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hmm looks intresting the rewrite but not fully sure yet , some pronous errors but otherwise good to read , will read later more i am too tired right now^^
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The rewrite I feel is great it’s right up my alley with reincarnation thing, but somewhat I feel kind of rushed, childhood personality seems nonexistent and lack interaction with Guardian.
Not sure if the later feel rushed because short demo it just how I feel.
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It is rushed but i needed to write that portion because thats what came to mind first. Didnt know what to write as a child at the time.
Now that Ive thought on it:
Episode 1 & 2 is child/wild hunt arc
Episode 3 & 4 is teen/academy arc
Episode 5 & 6 is adult/antagonist arc
FYI I have not gotten to write ep1, what youre all playing is ep3.
Also i think i realized I suck at writing multiple personalities. Ill try at ep1 & 2 but wouldn’t get my hopes up.
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Maybe reading something like Broken Mirror or Mother where are thou would give you idea.
Both story is about a childhood about gaining trust about opening new page in life.
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Which is the best race that make the game god mode???
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Oh that reminds me, your draconites true power is archdragons and humans are archdevil
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Assuming they are Azriens in this new version? Or at the very least have some of the abilities. Nevermind Archdevil sounds powerful for humans.
The old versions archdemon is the new versions archdevil with law power.
If it isn’t a spoiler what is Law Power in this version? Some form of reality warping?
It is a spoiler
I did one last update for the old version. It leads into the new version.
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